The Eds were loitering in the lane. Yep. Surprisingly, Eddy hasn't thought of a scam today.
"Loitering in the lane does have its advantages, Eddy." Double Dee said, trying to cheer Eddy up.
"I mean, look at the color of the sunny sky and trees, today."
"If you don't shut up right now, sockhead, You're going to have the color red all over." Eddy said sharply.
"I have the color brown inside my underwear, Eddy." Ed said.
There was silence.
"Just ignore him, and stick to the script." Eddy told Double Dee.
The Eds wree looking around. The kids, or piegons, as Eddy like to call them, are not in sight. They're not in the cul-de-sac, or in the lane, or the playground.
"Where is everybody?" Eddy asked impatiently.
"Maybe the children are intently watching television, Eddy." Double replied.
"Yeah, right..." Eddy muttered.
Eddy then felt something hit him in the face really hard.
He looked up, and saw Kevin on his bike. he slapped Eddy in the face.
"Ha, ha! Dork!" Kevin said.
"Pardon me, Kevin, but we're curious about the whereabouts of the children." Double Dee said.
"Have you seen them?"
"There at Nazz's sleepover party, loser." Kevin replied.
"Sleepover party? It's only four in the afternoon!" Eddy said.
"We're going to eat pizza, then play video games, and eat snacks all night. What do you care?" Kevin asked impatiently.
"How come Nazz didn't cordially invite us?" Double Dee asked nicely.
"Because the hats, Double Dee. Hats are the key." Ed said stupidly.
"DORKS!" Was Kevin reply when he rode away.
"Dorks?" Ed said.
"Why all the no good rotten, stinky, little...Nazz is supposed to invite us! This calls for some drastic measures!" Eddy said.
"Eddy, I don't want to..." Double Dee said, before Eddy took him and Ed by the arm, and Eddy dragged them to his house.
LATER..
The kids were in Nazz's house. Sleeping bags wree on the floor, boxes of pizza were on the coffee table, and the kids were playing video games on Nazz's plasma screen TV.
There was one thing missing to make Nazz's party perfect: Ed, Edd, 'n Eddy.
The Eds were outside Nazz's house. They were in disguise.
The Eds wree both wearing high platform shoes, leather purple pants, a purple vest, and afro wigs.
"Eddy, I feel ridiculous." Double Dee said.
"Rock on!" Ed said.
"Hey, If we want to get into the party, we have to wear disguises." Eddy said.
"Besides, this is the only disguise that my brother has."
Eddy pushed the doorbell.
DING DONG!
Ten seconds later, Nazz was standing in the doorway. Her short, blonde hair is a favorite to the cul-de-sac boys.
"Hi, do I know you, dudes?" Nazz asked the Eds nicely.
The Eds almost literally melted. Figure out why.
"Uh...yes...we're new to the cul-de-sac, and we're wondering If we can...chill her...for a while." Double Dee said. When it comes to being cool, Double Dee is not the master.
"Sure, no problem. Come on in." Nazz said, motioning the Eds to come into her house.
The Eds walked inside Nazz's house.
"Hook, line, and sinker." Eddy whispered to Double Dee.
Nazz showed the Eds into the living room, where the kids are. The living room was pretty big.
The ceiling was made of glass, there was a coffe table with wonderful carvings on the legs of the coffee table. There was also a medium sized plasma screen TV, lots of pizza, and plenty of video games that everyone can play.
"Hey guys, listen up!" Nazz said.
The kids looked at Nazz.
"Okay, we have newcomers, so let's, like, say hi to them." Nazz said.
The kids waved. Then, they went back to whatever they were doing.
"So, you guys can eat pizza, and play video games, while I get the cake from the kitchen." Nazz said. She walked into the kitchen to get the cake.
Now, Ed, he can't resist cake. It's his favorite food ever, next to buttered toast.
"Ed, stop jumping around!" Eddy ordered.
Ed still kept jumping around.
Then, Nazz walked out of the kitchen, holding a big, moist, chocolate cake.
"CH-CH-CH-CH-CH...CHOCOLATE CAKE!" Ed yelled. He ran over to Nazz, snathed the cake out of her hands, and smeared the chocolate cake all over his face.
Double Dee and Eddy ran over to Ed, so they can pull his head out of the cake, but Ed was strong.
Nazz ran over to Ed, pulled the afro wig, and then...
Everyone gasped. They saw Ed, but...without the wig.
"HEY! What is that dork doing here?" Kevin asked.
"Get that brute away from me!" Jimmy said, hugging Sarah.
Nazz took the afro wigs off of Double Dee and Ed. Everyone gasped again.
"You guys tried to crash into my party? that was not cool!" Nazz said.
"Hey, guys...let's take care of this dorks...my style." Kevin said, pounding his fist into his right hand.
Everyone hovered around Kevin, so they can get a piece of the Eds, if you know what I mean.
The Eds were shaking from head to toe. Their expressions on their faces were hilarious to Kevin.
30 MINUTES LATER...
The Eds were tied to a big oak tree in the lane. Everyone was laughing and pointing at the Eds. Then, they left, happy that they took care of the Eds.
"KEVIN! GET ME OUT OF THIS TREE!" Eddy yelled.
"ONCE I GET OUT OF THIS TREE..."
"Eddy, not so loud, it's dark." Double Dee said.
"At this rate, it will take us a couple of days until we escape from these ropes."
"Guys...I have to go to the bathroom." Ed said.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" Eddy and Double Dee were trying to get out of the tree before Ed...
A contest entry
- FanFiction-lots of options as well by Mel-the-Believer.
100 points, ended December 19, 2006, 12 entries
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Comments
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thnx for entering and srry it took so long to comment on.
okay, this is really good. even though ive never actually watched that show, ive heard about the show and i thought u did really well on it. its very well written.
good job, good luck and keep up the great work.

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HHAHAHHHAHAHAA! I LOOOOOVEEEE UR STORIES! *laughs so hard it hurts*

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It does my heart good to see a fanfic that stays in character.
Though I think Ed should have more random dialogue^^
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lol i like it. and thats sayin somethin, considering i ttly hate that show! nice fanfic!!!


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Another Ed, Edd, and Eddy story, cool.
I really like this one.
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This was a good one. I enjoyed reading it. I really did. Thanks for entering it into my contest. Good luck. God Bless!
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