So Into You

Hello my angel, I am so in to you. My beauty how is it that this beast can be tamed by your love? I look at you and I see your eyes and I feel the magic that they possess. I fear that you may look into my soul and see my passion, my sensitivity, my hunger for you. So ashamed am I that your eyes have stripped my gentleness and revealed my deepest passions, my beastly lust. My beauty, hurry!!! Kiss this beast that I may be your prince, your knight in shining armor. I'll rescue you with my black stallion; I'll seat you upon her. Open your gates my beauty, and let my black stallion enter until it rains. I harken to you, and hear the thunder. My stormy weather, bring down your sweet rain upon my black stallion as I penetrate deeper into your inviting rain forest. Naked in your eyes, I kiss your lips and our tongues dance as I move closer. Heart to heart and embraced, I feel your twin mountains as they peak and pierce my soul. As my black stallion goes deeper into your cavern, he grows strong, filling every inch of your entrance. Feeling the floor of your cave tremble, He backs out, but again he enters, and again, and again. I smell the scent of a woman, and it is you. Craving your softness, I trace softly the contour of your breast, as your nipples harden from my escalating breath. With my heart racing, I feel my lips moisten, my tongue desire and my mouth water. Deep inside your cavern, my black stallion penetrates as your crying walls begin to close in on him, squeezing, drawing, pulling, tugging and sucking him in deeper. I slide my tongue down to your erect nipples after climbing your beautiful voluptuous breast. Opening my moist lips, I surround your nipples, feeling their hardness, and rolling them around to my mouths corners and back to the center. My tongue rushes out with its softness, its moisture and heat from my volcanic boiling passion. My lips widen as my mouth pulls your nipples in, sucking them softly, gently. As I trace your arching back with my finger tips, the beast in me returns. You try to quickly kiss me, but it is too late. My ten inch, twelve horse power, big headed, ogre cock begins to throb as my fingertips find their way down to your now gyrating hips. You feel my throbbing rock pulsate as it seemingly lifts you off the floor. With my hands on your firm ass, I uncover your secret garden, and as the cool air meets your virgin hole, your eyes roll back and your tingling breast rise and fall with every breath, pushing your steel tipped nipples deeper into my still sucking mouth. You beg me to make love to your heated, hungry cunt, as you tighten up around my cock. Each throb sends an electrical shock to your nipples as you beg me to suck them harder. Moving my hands further down your back, I explore your ass, which now is shaking like an earthquake. I ask you if you love me, and unable to talk, you frantically nod your head yes, not even stopping to open your now closed eyes. I tell you that you have been naughty for not answering me as I spank your naked ass. Between moans, you manage “I love you" as I nibble lightly on the tip of your erect nipples. I yank my cock out of you, and you go into a rage telling me how much you hate me for what I've done. You, hot, horny and upset, beg me to fuck you, but my intentions are hidden from your blind burning desire. Again I ask you if you love me, and you clearly reply, "yes”. At this point, I am standing in front of you. You find yourself entranced as you stare up at a clean cut, boyish face with eyes that penetrate the night. You could almost feel him make love to you with his eyes alone. His mouth was small and with lips of a craftsman. Your body trembled at the thoughts of them. Your nipples hot and still moist from his tongue danced and sent waves to your still hungry pussy as the cool breeze blew across them. His boyish face gave him the look of being mannish, and was attached to a very attractive manly frame. He was a powerful machine, muscular, smooth skinned and very, very sensuous. His body was like all seven seas; his ripples were driving you crazy. His arms and fingers were thick, strong and gentle. His butt was firm and round the way only a woman can appreciate, and built for thrust. Without realizing it, you find your hand between you open thighs as your fingers probe your slippery, wet pussy. You could feel the juices run down your inner thighs as you stared in amazement at his genetically engineered cock. It was every bit of ten inches long, thick and muscular like the rest of his body. Its head looked like a huge mushroom and was even thicker than its long shaft. His alien cock seemed to be carved from stone. As it throbbed, it looked like a living, breathing rock. You now realize you will do anything to bring his soul closer to yours. You get a cloth and blindfold him, knowing he's accustomed to being in charge. After commanding him to lay down on your king sized bed of silk sheets, you light two candles of jasmine. Dipping a large sweet strawberry in lemon juice, you bring it to his lips, he opens his mouth and you tell him to bite. Now, with a small soft basting brush, you gently strike his chest, making sure his nipples are included. You are aroused as his tiny tight nipples respond to their lashing. Dipping your brush into the chilled pudding you have prepared, you brush it on your nipples, moaning from its cool wet touch. Moving your breast to his sweet and sour lips, you command him to open his mouth. As his tongue tastes the pudding, he quickly begins to circle your nipples until his tongue reaches the sensuous tip of your hard erect nipples. You no longer want to tease as he sucks your breast, sending wave after wave of electricity to your hot, wet, orgasmic cunt. Hotter than you've been before, you crave for a taste of him in your mouth. You lower your lips to his nipples sucking on them as his washboard abdomen tightened. Working your way down to his tower of a cock, you pause and your hunger overcomes you as you remove his blindfold. Mounting his boyish face, you focus your attention on his stiff pulsating rod. Wanting to savor all of his lean cock, you start at its base. His hard body sends spasms to the farthest reaches of your soft, delicate body. Moving his stiff cock with your hand, you uncover balls the size of nectarines. With no time wasted, you engulf one of his knots in your mouth. His washboard stomach tightens and his back arches against your breast as he begins to whimper, squirm and moan. Taking your finger, you enter his tight virgin ass. He is helpless as you say to him "who's the bitch now?”

At that moment his long, soft, wet tongue darted out deep into your sizzling, wet cunt. Your world shook. I explored her pussy with my tongue, her hips began to grind, shiver and thrust as I buried my face in her soft submissive cunt. Her sweet nectar was abundant as I quenched my thirst. She swallowed my balls whole as my soft, wet tongue made a slow trail from her hot hairy pussy to her unsuspecting virgin hole. My huge black cock needed her as she climbed its shaft to its pulsating mushroom peak. Spreading her ass, my slithering tongue found its target. With her hot pussy juices flowing down her leg, my tongue in her ass sent her into a fuck frenzy. She swallowed my begging monster cock whole and sucked it like hard candy. We both were submitting, we both were dominant, as both gave to the other, and we both received openly. While he still lay on his back, I stretched my pussy open, and slowly lowered my cunt onto his throbbing black cock. I stretched my clit to the limit as his vibrating throb sent body shaking spasms throughout my entire being. As I lowered my pussy down slowly onto his cock, my juices ran down it. It seemed like an eternity to completely engulf its entirety. I have never had anything in me so powerful, so hard. I orgasmed immediately as his strong hands fondled my breast and pinched my nipples. Her hips moved slowly as her hot squeezing pussy began to make its way back up my long shaft. As her juices lubed my cock, she began to move quicker and with ease, as she milked my muscle. I have never had anyone take all of my cock the way she has. Faster and faster, she climbed and thrust down as I began to meet her thrust for deep penetrating thrust. I could feel her hungry cunt gripping my cock with each thrust. Thrusting, grinding in and out, in and out, our temperatures rise as we move together with our hips dancing. Suddenly her fingers dig into my chest as her head goes back and her back arches. Feeling her pussy squeeze my cock, I thrust faster and faster as I cum deep inside her rippling cunt. Her eyes close as she scream and tremble in orgasm after orgasm. Both exhausted, we cuddle.

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  • One word--WOW!!! What a lucky woman!!! win


  • glenn shannon silver member
    March 31
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    lusty write

    i thought that was very saucey indeed.
    clever ability to be both players in the show.i want that woman.shes a hottie .

  • I love the way you wrote both points of views. Your description was very vivid and STEAMY HOT. I enjoyed the FULL read; however, I really must stop ready these at work. Very passionate and hungry for more.


  • xXxAcid-tearsxXx
    January 31
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    Great

    I liked how you wrote about both points of view


  • Rend the Veil
    September 30, 2008

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    Amazing Senual write

    i love your story, they are very well written and very detailed! in which i like but most of all you showed passion and it wasnt one sided! I hurt at the very thought of it! ouch!


  • LovetimesLove
    September 20, 2008
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    Usually the last thing said or written is first remembered. Yet with "So Into You", a beautiful and somewhat magical masterpiece you sculpt vividly. Within your craft, your gift in thought, you've truly given us something here that could make Mona Lisa loosen her chasity belt. BRAVO Deep1!!!

  • Sick Sunshine
    August 2, 2008

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    Interesting..

    I like how you made it seem as though, only during sex are men and woman actually one. Showing how Both NEED one another. Your words are very strong.
    It started out soft and worded kindly then..got Hard and
    knew no discretion. =] ..clever..


  • Venus25
    July 8, 2008
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    OMG!!! That was an amazing read, left me tingling all over! Thanks for sharing! Keep it up

  • kiwigirljacks
    May 21, 2008
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    I have nothing to say... I've passed out!!

    *goes off to relieve self*

    HOT!!!


  • JuneMarrie
    May 16, 2008

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    Beautiful

    You give a completely differnt look into love making. I love the beginning how you use "stallion" "moutions" and "Cave" to describe the act. Loved it!

  • DustyOldHalo
    January 5, 2007

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    You write well. Descriptive. Detailed. Hot. Spicy. PWP. Everything a person would dream of in a story.

    Pardon me, need to go and print this one out.....for further study. Honest.

    See? I wasn't done commenting and your story excited me so much I hit the wrong button and it recorded it already.

    I'm guessing you write elsewhere too? Another group? Your style seems familiar to me.



    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

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