In times of darkness and dispair,
do not worry, you're well aware,
that on the night of Christmas Eve
our spirits will be asleep and at ease.
Could it be the time of year,
where everyone is of good cheer,
that special time of christmas season,
when everyone is of good reason.
Christmas Eve will soon be here,
of that im sure we'll have to hear,
the pawing of each little hoof,
right above us on the roof.
A contest entry
- Christmas and friends by Jinxgirl.
100 points, ended December 16, 2006, 7 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Christmas Time by Mel-the-Believer.
125 points, ended December 23, 2006, 8 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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That was really great. It was beautifully written. I really am glad to have read it, and it also holds truth to it. Thanks for entering. Good luck. God Bless! Merry Christmas!
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The most precious thing you have done so far.
Leave it to a child to capture the essence of Christmas.
It was wonderful to read.
Let it snow
Let it snow
Let it snow.
*excuse me* Got carried away there.
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this is very cute, a good children's poem. thank you for entering!
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Welcome To SW
This was very pretty. You did very good on it. I love the flow of this to. It was very poetic. The best of luck to you in the contest!
Kamala -
This is really good! I didn't know you where a writer. I don't know if you care but you forgot to capitalize "I" in your last set of lines. Other then that it's really good. Tons of fun to read. Good job again!
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This is really cute, not too serious, in fact very fun. I like it a lot. It has a nursery rhyme style to it. The next to last line seems a bit off as far as the number of beats, so you may want to take a look at it.
Keep Writing,
Kat
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