Why does everything ...

Why does everything have to be the way it is

Why does everything happen to go down the drain

Why does everything have to happen at one time

Why does everything that has happened go bad

Why does everything happen to end up leading back to me

Why does everything go wrong that was write

Why does everything seemed to be preached about

Why does everything you do seem to be wrong

Why does everything have to be a threat to life

Why does everything show that they never loved

Why does everything show that nobody cares

Why does everything seem to crash

Why does everything not make since to all

Why does everything want to prove you wrong

Why does everything show that they never will love

Why does everything seem so impossible

Why does everything so normal seem so weird

Why does everything not fall in place no mater where you put it

Why does everything seem to happen so fast

Why does everything have to have a consequence

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  • austins grl
    March 3, 2007
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    LOVE IT AN LOVE YOU!!


  • Zaedyns Mommy
    February 16, 2007
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    this was interesting and different but I loved it. good job.

  • mj5
    December 13, 2006

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    Because that's just the way things are. Or so says my mom.

    I see your piece beginning with the theme of "things going wrong," followed by "a lack of love," and then returning to "things going wrong or getting out of control" again. I feel like that all the time lately, and your writing speaks to that and feels real to me because of it.

    Thanks for sharing it.


  • Rize
    December 11, 2006
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    different but good


  • Dirty and Broken
    December 8, 2006
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    does-not dose...but it is good....

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