The story of the awakened Super Saijin (CH 1)

Thunder cracked and the clouds broke to envelope the open green savannah in an electromagnetic storm. The grass waved like many hairs, the trees groaned and the wildlife scampered to hide from the so sudden unleashing of intensity.1

The sky once dazzled with ocean blue, now stricken of colour to cast an awfully, sickening bleak blackness. 2

There, in the centre of it all stood two people. One young girl and her elderly father stood at least fifty yards from each other. 3

His dull blue eyes tinged with black, glared straight into her bright aluminous green eyes, so intensely his own knees became weak beneath the weight of his intent.4

She stood firm, calm and proud yet her mind recovered the insecurities of what she was about to do. 5

He spoke;6

“You’re nothing and are to be imprisoned by your rhymes-7

He spat8

You make me sick to my core”9

To his unpleasant surprise a grin spread across her tattered lips as she threw her head back and laughed in an insanely consumed way. Fear lashed his face, with her whip-like laugh that sounded deep yet so uncontrollable.10

She chuckled in rhymes and riddles;11

“When the remarkable turns bizarre12

Reason turns rancid13

The uninformed must improve14

Their deficit or die…15

You’re stubborn humanity shines bright16

As fear enslaves your impure heart17

If you believe your intentions right18

Where, in life, shall we start?”19

His throat purred with anger, yet his brow leaked with fear as he opened his mouth to retort in intellectuals. However, his mind screamed at him to retreat, for his understanding of her statement was extremely poor. Did she mean let’s start now? Did she wish to confuse him?20

He, unheedingly, snapped an ignorant reply;21

“If you dare to step inside my mind22

You will be honoured to find23

That I am better than you24

In matters of getting through,25

In fact these petty rhymes you clause26

Must have some silly cause?”27

He felt he’d outdone himself proud. His eyes widened with every word, he had concentrated so hard on the rhyming retort that he had forgotten to keep his cool.28

He had not even broken her wild grin. 29

Under a giggle she muttered something he could not quite hear and again…began to rhyme. 30

“Oh so stupid, father you are quite ill31

Of the intelligence you claim your own32

I’ve spoken once and broken your will33

With less than a giblet of what I’ve known”34

He trembled, whimpered and lost his bold stance.35

“You forget over father, that you disgust me36

You’ve wreaked my life with your silly greed37

So now I challenge, to finally be free38

Of your every selfish, brittle and evil deed”39

She frowned, her eyes deepening in colour as his faded.40

The air became thicker and the intensity matched the humidity.41

Lightning struck very close to her…not even a flinch surprised her. Rocks around began to lift, crumble and circulate. The air became thick with what seemed to be smoke-which was in fact the power that released itself from the mysterious child. 42

An in depth scream happened upon his ears from her tattered lips, as the intensity, the smoke, humidity and storm broke worse. The rocks increased in size, as they ripped themselves from the forgiving earth. 43

“For many years, I have suffered under you44

But today everything is now unleashed45

It’s simple and justice what I have to do 46

As for now the rage has been released47

So I take this gift to use against sloth48

With this (until now) hidden wrath”49

In less than a blink of an eye she stood strong, bulging with rage and boiling with hatred, less than a hair away from him. He went to strike her with his fist of injustice, but was quickly reformed into his place, as she struck him in the chest with her knee of muscle…50

Some say the man fell to his knees and pleaded to appease. Others say he swallowed his pride and ran from her. But the story goes, that he prayed for forgiveness and only in return, did he receive the justice that had been in store for him since his own brittle young age. 51

I’ve lost myself52

And this power emerged53

My face trembled rage54

Then my soul felt urged.55

To ignore me and my age56

Because I was cold inside57

I realized my power58

My dignity had lied,59

I WAS a powerful flower60

No matter what they said61

My parents put me down62

As far as I was dead63

But unexpected,64

I returned the frown65

Fought against them66

Until I was renown67

They are now scared68

Of all the things I’ve bared69

The anger that corrupts me70

And all the rage they see.71

So now I’m left alone72

Ascending to depths unknown73

Destroying these drones74

Who felt they did now own75

This Super Saijin that I am76

Filled with energy none surpassed77

They expected me a lamb78

But I guess I’ m now classed79

As a fucking Psychotic 80

Author notes

I wrote this because a few people have asked where I got the inspiration for the poem at the end. The fact is I got it from the dream I had-which is the above story.

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