Phycotic Croissant

As MR CROISSANT found a MARSHMALLOW, Mr CROISSANT put it in his mouth.1

"I'm now a WARRIOR," said Mr CROISSANT as Mr CROISSANT pat his LONG POINTY SWORD hanging at his waist.2

MR CROISSNT was about to shout 'OI' to a GLOOMY BUNNY sitting in a bin having a bit of POTATO, but a FUZZY HIPPO got him and Mr CROISSANT hit his mouth on a rock causing him to hurt from CONCUSSION.3

"I'm going to kill you!' said Mr CROISSANT.4

Mr CROISSANT got his sword and began to shout.5

'AARRGGGHHH!'6

Sword hit HIPPO skin and usually, HIPPO's pass away as this occurs.7

GLOOMY BUNNY was crying now so Mr CROISSANT got an IPOD OF DOOM and put it in GLOOMY BUNNY's hand.8

GLOOMY BUNNY said 'thanks.' 9

Everyone was extremely happy and they all went home to have BEEF STROGANOF.10

Author notes

I went 127 words without an 'e'. It's soooooo hard. I used 27 word in the list.

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  • Elementalwolf
    March 8, 2007

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    Pretty cool

    Pretty cool
    I think that this is a weird piece of work but none the less a fantastic one. the last sentence has EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEs in it so the whole story doesn't have no eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees in it. But I think that it is a funny story and you should be rewarded for you efforts. I really like it.

    It was much better than I could have done...

    Thanks for letting me read it.


    All the best...
    Lewin

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • Elementalwolf
    March 8, 2007

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    Pretty cool

    I think that this is a weird piece of work but none the less a fantastic one. the last sentence has EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEs in it so the whole story doesn't have no eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees in it. But I think that it is a funny story and you should be rewarded for you efforts. I really like it.

    It was much better than I could have done...

    Thanks for letting me read it.


    All the best...
    Lewin

    beginning: 5, language: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Trillian
    December 5, 2006
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    I sense a need for something: pronouns! But unfortunately, most of them have e in them... You're really talented in... uh... how do I say this... writing without e? Good job on using 27 of my words. I enjoyed reading this!
    Keep on writing!
    Trillian =)

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

  • Dinky Di
    December 4, 2006

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    cute

    The last sentence has "E"s in it though. None the less a fantastic effort, much better than I could have done!