From beyond my imagination
Where doves fly free,
Like crows in their disguise,
Hearts black as the raven,
And dead with such cold.1
Through the gateway,
An arch of so much thorn,
Like the crown I wore upon my brow,
Green with envy,
And poison with such lust.2
The mazes led me here
To a river I once knew--
Innocence, tainted with rust,
Red in its own luminescence,
And rippled with broken dreams.3
A single fire burns,
Elucidates my path,
Isolated from the darkness within,
White with intensity,
And braves where naught else will tread.4
The azure sky, lined with ice,
That only the moon can bless,
Like a Goddess shimmering down,
Silver in its own brilliance,
And defying what lies ahead.5
A contest entry
- Poetry Break by Chemical Imbalance.
500 points, ended December 4, 2006, 5 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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great write!
Hey! I used to be under "Immortalbeauty" but I changed my path a little and here i am....I love this by the way; "A single fire burns,
Elucidates my path,
Isolated from the darkness within"
I reallly like how you write.
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awesome
love the imagery. your really good at what you do. loving your work -
So beautiful and well written.- i dont know what else to say.
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This is a very interesting poem full of nice fantasy imagery. It's like a dream. The flow was kept throughout the whole piece. Good job! Thanks for entering the contest and good luck!
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