The Begining

She waited in the rain, as she did every day. She was destined for it. She was in love. Saddly, though, on that day, she ended it. How could she not? It was in an upset. Life was surely over at that point anyway. When the car pulled up and 'They' got out she knew. 1

She closed her eyes, it was over. 2

She pulled the blade out, slowly as always, and pressed it to her flesh. Her Green-blue eyes flashed open and she saw her love. The perfect blonde hair. Tears welled up in those beautiful eyes and she regreted the blood she was loosing. It couldn't end like this, but it was. She couldn't stop now. 3

Her beautiful blonde looked on with cold eyes. She would never show her feelings in public. That was always the norm. She had even tried so hard. When would things... Wait, they wouldn't now. Nothing would get better. She would only die.4

She fell back, landing softly on the wet ground. Her eyes strait up at the sky, rain falling harder now, determined to soak her through. She was so cold. Things were getting dimmer, but she could tell when a person calapsed beside her and gently pulled her into there arms. 5

She could tell who they were just by the light breathing and the way her chest moved against her shoulder. Her beautifully perfect blonde had come to her at the last moment, despite those who had been trying to hold her back. It would be better now. If so, then why was it still cold?6

She opened her eyes slowly. Then looked up. Her blonde was crying. The first time she had seen it outside of a bedroom, or something private like that.7

"Why the tears, dearheart?" she wanted to ask, but when she opened her mouth all that came was a croak.8

She breathed out quickly, and then tried again. Her voice sounded pathetic and far away as the blonde hushed her swiftly. The love between them was obvious, but 'They' were coming.9

Again she was cold. It was getting darker. The cold enveloped her compleatly as the darkness set in. She knew now it was over. 10

Everything. She wanted to go back! She didn't want to die like this! She pushed against the dark and the cold, but to no avail. It couldn't end like this!11

The lights slowly came back. Into focus came a room, eggshell white. Curtains clouded the window. She looked around confused, This couldn't be heaven, this couldn't be hell. Where was she?12

She shakily sat up and looked around more. Still confused. Where was the one she loved? What was this place? She felt a twinge on her arm. She looked down and saw tubeing. What the hell? she thought.13

Then she looked up suddenly, she knew where she was. She shivered.

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Yeah, this is only the first part of what I was thinking about. Definatly going to add more...

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