A Short Story Of Her

I'm sitting at the computer like always... Dressed for anything, black fishnets attached to a short black lace garter skirt, and low black court stilettos, a short black pleated skirt, cut low to show my back, my dark red top tied around my neck draping low and tight on my breasts and tying again around my waist.. I had braided my long blood red hair into pigtails earlier and had left it that way curling around itself with no hairties... I'm daydreaming about her, I can't help it I try not to but I dream about how I'd have her. I'd take her, I'd take all day with her.... Slowly kissing up her thighs through the fishnets, making her stand up and covering every inch of her body with my tongue and lips. Starting with her legs and feet and working my way up the front, and then up the back over her luscious ass and up her back. Dominate but worshipping... I don't need her to say a word.. She can make all the noise she wants but words are not needed.. I'd kiss and lick every inch of her avoiding the most sensitive parts, making her wait for it.. Want it all the more.. I'd slowly, devouringly kiss her until she can't help but gasp with my hands fisted in her hair, until all she wants is more. Sitting her down with me at her feet, rising slowly up against her until my skin is warming hers and my lips are against her ear. Lightly flicking my tongue against her ear as she gasps softly, I lean my head down and sink my teeth softly into her neck going slowly, savouring her moans. While flicking my fingernails over her nipples through her shirt listening to her get louder and grind her body harder. But it's not enough, I pull back and pull off her shirt and skim my fingers over her lightly, wondering if after long enough she'll beg for it. Going back to my slow worship of that perfect ivory skin with my tongue, still avoiding her nipples and pussy but tormenting her everywhere else. Licking her inner thighs while she rolls her hips against me trying to get me to do what she wants, I pull aside the soaking wet strip of her thong through her fishnets. Getting close enough to graze my tongue lightly over her clit almost not even there, fighting the temptation to take more, while she goes wild in front of me.......1

Sliding my tongue along the lips of her licking up the wetness without giving her anything I wonder if she will finally beg......2

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    November 24, 2006

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    Wicked!

    I am sure she will beg!
    That was amazing! and Very nicely written!
    It is short though and Your beginning and ending are very good and new too!
    I enjoyed reading this, so if you have more please do not hesitate to inform me!

    Keep on writing,
    Nooni

    beginning: 5, language: 4, ending: 4, characters: 2.


  • The Shadow Knight
    November 23, 2006
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    Not much sense.

    This makes no sense to me. Maybe you might try writing something that makes more sense... Maybe I'm just dumb.

    beginning: 3, language: 5, plot: 2, ending: 3, dialog: 1, characters: 2.