She can tell your hiding something, 1
She can see she will be broken once more.2
She feels decived and hurt,3
She stuck, Shes angry, and feels like nothing again.4
But what he doesnt know is,5
She is hiding something from him,6
it isnt his though.7
Shes a hypocrite, and suffers from WRITERS BLOCK.8
Please tell me what you think
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Interesting
I was alerted to you through one of your comments on a different profile, an analytical perspective of a persons writing and their demeaner needed in order to write such material. I came here, and, I am interested in your writing style. Personally, I never write poetry without rhyme, but am intrigued that it could actually sound as you have made it sound. Kudos.
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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