Heart Of Stone (Chapter 2)

"everyone i would like you to meet the new student, Jarad."1

the teacher said making every student look up at the new kid, though they all had a look of disgust on their face, except melody, her face was still masked.2

Jarad was tall with hair that had been dyed black, a lip and eyebrow piercing. he wore black cargo pants with new rock boots. he wore a long sleeve shirt with holes for his thumbs and was listening to his Ipod. The teacher told him to go sit down in an empty seat, the only empty seat was next to melody.3

'please dont let him sit down here, please dont let him sit down here' she thought while Jarad made his way over to her.4

he looked at melody. she had her hair dyed black with purple tips and heavy black eyeshadow on with her lips painted a deep purple.She had a black pants on and a baggy black shirt.5

Jarad sat down yet said nothing to no-one. he decided the girl next to him had been through enough pain and didnt want to talk, and that everyone else hated him by how he looked.

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not finished but dont have any time atm to finish it

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  • SweetAngelKitten
    January 25, 2007

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    I like it

    Hey, I like this story. Keep writing it, I would love to read it. It sounds like it would be good The mood you set for the story is what makes me like it most. Keep writing.