The vast opening of the cave winked me in the face. The dark, dank, opening dripped with water. It stank of what smelled like rotten eggs, sulfur, ugh. I guess a Boy Scout troop had come through here and had forgotten to throw the eggs away properly. As I moved through it began to smell less like sulfur and more like... a cave. Dust clogged my nostrils and I moved ahead.1
I switched on my flashlight to check out my surroundings. I found stalactites and stalagmites and I had to weed my way around holes only guessing as to how far down they went. The cave walls were as dark as oil and certainly felt like it too. I ran my hand across he wall.2
I found a small stream ahead and after following the sound I found it. I bent down to drink from it and noticed that it tasted like chocolate. I filled my stomach with this strange brew. I stood up and continued. Wait, something seems different. The cave grew lighter and a strange noise was coming from up ahead. I switched my light off and and found where the noise was coming from. A field of candy was ahead and I noticed some smaller people were ahead. 3
I saw the chocolate stream go up a tube and disappear. A group of people were standing by a river of the same stuff I had drunk earlier. A boy had fallen in and was being sucked up a tube. A man in a hat yelled "No, stop you'll contaminate the water!!" I realized what had happened. The boy was quickly sucked through the tube. 4
Four more would leave later on. Each in a different fashion, but all to their deaths. Wait I've seen this movie before. Crap, I found the back entrance to a stupid chocolate factory. 5
Author notes
ok ok my first story on here, but once again this was a school assignment where I had to write a hourney through a cave using all of my senses.
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Interesting...Yeah, I think you've read ths one to me before. You know, if it wasn't for your creative writing class, I don't think you'd have a whole lot to ost on here.....
--Brooks The Great
(aka BizzareProjekts)
