Sophy maiden,1
the devil forsook,2
to outcast the means of her way,3
such a beautiful girl 4
could be mistook,5
a misfortunate price to pay,6
a test or temptation?7
to God or towards Baal...8
did they both want her dead?9
the trouble with knowledge10
and all that it stands for,
was it the price of her head?11
sudden so vicious,12
the Devil did stand,13
evil and melicious,14
was there any place for this maiden to land?15
God only knew what this maiden was missing,16
the day of summission for heaven to open it's hand,17
it didn't mean nothing to angels or demons,18
for this fair maiden weren't told...19
for it was obivious with all of her wisdom,20
Sophy maiden would lose her soul..21
A contest entry
- Faerytales by February Moon.
350 points, ended December 5, 2006, 8 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Great job on this, best of luck in my contest.
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if you read i appreciate all feedback thank you your friend and poet uz...
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hi i didn't know if poems themselves were allowed? or' just stories in general so i triede to turn a poem into a short storie i hope you enjoyed reading
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