A Best friend's wishes
Hey i'm Franky, I live with my mom, dad and my grandma Pauline. I live in the Amazon Forest. My best friend is Maryann she lives 2 blocks away. We always hang out and play tag together. Hey, did i mention we are trees? My friends John and Amanda lives on the outskirts of the forest. They only visit on weekends. A few days ago they came to visit. John spent the night at my house. On the 7th of June it was Amanda's birthday. I could sadly not go because grandma Pauline died. She was only 73years old, but she died happily.So i wrote Amanda a letter,
Dear Mandy,
Happy Birthday. I hope you enjoy this day as it yours alone. Have a great year a head full of love, joy and happiness. I am sorry i could not come due to a family problem. Sorry
Love Franky.
The next thing i had to do was write a letter to cousin Johnty, i had to tell him the good news and the bad.
Dear Johnty,
I am very sorry to inform you that granma Pualine passes away yesterday. We hope you will join us for the funeral next week. I also have some good news for you cousin, mummy is pregnant and i am going to have a baby sister. Hope we see you next week.
Franky.
On the following Tuesday we had the ceremony for grandma. Alot of the family was there to support us through this hard time. A few days after the ceremony little Tanya was born. She was as light as a feather, but i was not allowed to carry her just as yet. The next day we had a Christining for Tanya. Later that evening Maryann and her family came over. She said she had some bad news of her own. Maryann and her brother Tony were moving to the Berry- Berry forest. I was not going to see Maryann for the next few years. Before Maryann left i gave her Grandma Pauline's favourtie Blue beaded necklace and matching earings. I dropped Maryann back home that was it.. She was really leaving.'Maryann, left a while ago Tanya' she was my best friend.
A few months later i was accepted into the Green Grass Elementary school. I had a lovely beight uniform. Blue shirt and brown pants.. i Can't forget the bright green cap to go with it. I enjoyed going to school and making new friends. In the 4th grade i was the school's youngest prefect. So all went well for me.
But what about Maryann and Tony. I got a letter from her and she seemed very happy. The letter read,
Dearest Franky,
How are you? School had begun and its a great lot of fun. I am making a lot of new friends but i promise you i am not forgetting all of you.. I will be coming back in the summer to meet you all.. I study at the Spring Grove Boarding for girls. In school we learn about humans and their lives.. I am also part of the school's basket ball team. So i am very happy. Hope all is good there. Take care,
Love Maryann.
So all went well.. We may live in different forests and may not see each other everyday. But we still love each other very much and wish each other the best in what they do
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Touching and Sweet
I really enjoyed reading this..so meaningful...Great ending as well..make you want to appreciate a really good friend.. Keep up the good writes..
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This is a great story. I love the simple idea, it's amazing, this story takes you away with the use of simple descriptions

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Interesting story. It's cute in a way and I liked your simple description. It made the plot sound better. Good job and keep it up!
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Hey there! You are a brill writer and person. Keep up the good work! *Hugs* Jess - the Espanol-English latina from the UK!~ ;p

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haha who knew trees lived like this lol. cute little story. didnt see much mistakes if any at all. hmmmmmm only problem is i dont really c a point to the story. it was okay though
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cute
it was interesting in a childish sort of way. Very well written, good grammer, so nothing to pick on keep you the good work! -
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Well, that was so funny!!! I've never heard of such a story... it looks cool, very funny and very creative!!! Didn't know Trees could have such a passionate life!!! -
I'm confused.
These are trees? They seem to be very mobile for trees. They go to school, and have a christening. Well, it is a children's story. I guess it would also help if there were pictures.
Andy
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