It’s long time since we met each other! Time was not favoring enough to make us meet often. 1
I was sophisticatedly brought up with silver spoon; the thing to be pitied was I was fed with no good food. I wished to meet you whenever I felt lonely! Yes, loneliness was eating me a lot. I shouldn’t have been a soul of empty pride and vanity. I didn’t win any heart or name. I hardly had smiled and never in my life laughed if I remembered correctly. 2
Realized truth said that it happened to be too delayed.3
When I was surrounded by people, I was not willing to accept them with arms wide opened. The closed eyes said that would be better if they had been given a chance to glance around the faces that pitied me. I missed you a lot. I would like to meet, but a transformation after having bidden adieu to the living souls and made an entry to the world above would never be of good use. I would like to talk to me within myself, but no time and no life! 4
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Man forgets to live at present!
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Needs editing
Hai Kiddy, As a person in the business of writing for 28 years, not fiction, but journalism, I feel your piece needs editing. Be more expansive in prose. You are using poetry style here also. Just giving hints of your thoughts. Write simple direct sentences. While reading short stories by real masters, watch closely their craft. The well-rounded way they build their stories. You should be willing to put in very hard work in the beginning. They say that once you are on firm ground with your craft, stories will evolve for you effortlessly. All the best.
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