It was Horror Friday at the theater and a horror double feature was playing. Tonight it was The Mummy Returns and Night of the Living Dead. The features began at 10:00 pm and ended around 2:00 am. Victoria loved horror flicks and though she had seen both of the movies before, she had not seen them on the big screen. She was eagerly looking forward to it. She didn't really believe in creatures of the night, but she loved the thrill these movies gave her. She got a large popcorn and drink and settled in for the first film.1
Tori, as she was known by her friends, was very likeable. She had blonde hair, green eyes, slim build and average height. She was twenty-one and had a comely figure. She had once been engaged, but she and her fiancee had grown apart and she was currently uninvolved. Her friends thought her something of a fanatic when it came to horror shows. Besides, she really enjoyed watching them alone. It made it somehow more thrilling. The first movie began and Tori sat totally captivated.2
The owner of the theater would run the projector because he enjoyed watching the young women from the projection room and also from a peep hole in the screen. His eyes adjusted quickly to the dark. In fact, he enjoyed the dark. He was primarily nocturnal. Tori sat on the front row and he could see her face clearly illuminated by the light reflecting from the screen. Her attention was so fixed on the screen that he could see every detail of her lovely face and body. He yearned for her. There was a fifteen minute intermission between the movies and he plotted his strategy.3
Tori had to attend to a call of nature as the large Coke she had consumed became a little much for her bladder. The owner went to the theater doors and waited for her to return a trifle impatiently. Finally she did return and he met her at the entrance.4
"Hi, I'm Nathan," He told her smiling widely. He was very charismatic with dark hair and eyes, nearly 6'2". "I'm the projectionist. Would you like to see the projection room?" Tori was not the first nor would she be the last young woman he invited to the projection room. Nathan seemed to possess a supernatural power over women.5
Tori had never seen a projection room and the idea as well as the man appealed to her. "Yes, I believe I'd like that," she responded smiling back.6
"What's your name?"7
"Tori," she replied.8
Nathan led Tori around to the side of the theater and through a door which led to the stairs which took them to the projection room. It was dimly lit and there were two projectors. There was a love seat, a table, and a small refrigerator. 9
Nathan dimmed the lights of the theater until it was dark.10
Nathan said, "Flip this switch and the movie will begin." And he indicated the control on the projector. Tori turned on the projector. There was a window overlooking the theater and the screen. The movie appeared on the screen.11
"When one reel finishes, we will start the next reel. There are usually two or three reels. As you can see, the second projector is loaded and ready. When it is near time to change projectors, an alarm sounds."12
"Is that all there is to it?" Tori asked.13
"Pretty much," Nathan replied. "After a reel is finished, I rewind it and put it in its case."14
Nathan took Tori by the hand and led her to the loveseat. "Tell me about yourself," said Nathan as they sat down.15
"Well, I was born in San Diego and came here to LA to go to school. I'm twenty-one and I am going to college in the fine arts department."16
"Have you decided on a major?"17
"Presently I am studying Modern Art, but I may change," she explained.18
"Change to what?"19
"I think I would like to act," she smiled.20
"Movies really mean a lot to you?"21
"Yes, I just love them!" she exclaimed.22
"I own this theater, you know?"23
"Really!" said Tori excited.24
"Yes, and I also have a mansion with a private screening room and lots of horror flicks I am sure you've never seen."25
Tori's interest was really piqued by that statement. "Where do you get them?" she asked.26
"I have a friend who produces them for private collectors. They are triple X rated," answered Nathan. "Sex and horror. Are you interested?"27
"Yes, I'd love to see them. How many do you have?"28
"About a hundred. Would you like to see one after the show finishes here?"29
"Well, it is kind of late, but I guess it would be okay. I don't have school tomorrow."30
Nathan smiled and kissed her. After a moment's hesitation Tori returned his kiss and their tongues danced together. He unbuttoned the top buttons of her blouse and she caught his hand. "Do I make you nervous?" asked Nathan. 31
"Yes, this is going a little fast for me," said Tori.32
He kissed her again and she responded. He unfastened another button on her shirt and this time she did not stop him. He slipped his hand inside her top and gently squeezed her left breast. Tori wrapped her arm around his neck. They kissed for several minutes as he caressed her breast.33
Nathan removed his hand from her breast and set her in his lap. She was wearing jeans and he slid his hand between her legs over her pants and gently messaged her over her mound. She began to become warm and damp. He kissed the side of her neck. They kissed and necked while the movie ran. When it ended, Nathan showed Tori how to shut down the equipment. He left the theater custodian to clean and lock up, and Tori and he drove to his mansion.34
He took her to his private screening room and put on a movie, 'The Film Maker'. Tori watched the movie intently. Nathan sat next to Tori and ran his right hand over her jeans between her legs. He unzipped her and she caught his hand. He rested his hand there and Tori did not remove it. Nathan slipped his hand under her panties and began to play with her pussy. She was becoming quite excited. When the movie was over she said, "It seemed so real."35
"You can do almost anything with special effects," Nathan answered. "Let's go upstairs."36
"Maybe I should go," Tori said hesitating.37
"I'd really like it if you would stay," said Nathan and he kissed her. After a moment she returned his kiss wrapping her arms around his neck.38
Nathan led her to the master bedroom upstairs. They embraced and kissed each other deeply. He removed her blouse. She had small beautiful tits with small pale pink areolas and medium nipples. He set her on the bed and removed her tennis shoes, socks, jeans and panties. Her gorgeous legs came perfectly together at her mound which was lightly decorated with a thin coat of blonde hair. He disrobed.39
Spreading Tori's legs he addressed her vulva. Stimulating her clit with his fingers he penetrated her carnal canal with his tongue. She began to moan and cream for him. Nathan was delighted with the taste of her nectar. He worked his way up to her breasts and squeezed and sucked them. Then he began smothering her with kisses and she eagerly responded. Sliding his bulging rod inside her he began slowly and powerfully fucking her. The lips of her pussy became engorged with blood and held him snugly. Tori gyrated her hips to his motion. He paced himself to last. In the course of an hour she exploded with several orgasms. Finally he blasted inside her giving her his load.40
Still thrusting inside her he stared into her eyes and she fell into a trance. Finding the vessel at the left side of her neck he revealed his fangs and bit deeply into her artery. Draining her quickly of her life's fluid she became flaccid and expired. He carried her naked body to his car and drove to the lake and dumped her into the water. He returned to his mansion well pleased looking forward to the next Friday Night Horror Feature.
Author notes
Option 2.
In a list
A contest entry
- The Underground (with options!) by genre bizarre.
190 points, ended April 13, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Give me something good to read by illegalfairy.
600 points, ended April 12, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - *Easy Poison - Venomous Vampires* by Prodigious.Mirth.
150 points, ended March 20, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Vampires XD by DeathNoteYaoi.
240 points, ended October 13, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I didn't like the picture, but the story was nice. ..very erotic. Thanks for entery
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Hi Cathy!
Yeah, I've got a habit of tossing in a picture of a young woman in my stories. If they're rated adult, more tends to show
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I'm very happy that you like this story.
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and applauding.
Andy
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Interesting
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Hi!
I gather that you didn't like this story much. I used to write a lot of lame vampire erotica. I'm trying to improve, and I don't write vampires much anymore.
Thanks for stopping by.
Andy
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wow that was kinda scary at the end. real surprise ending i guess but cool.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Thanks
Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. I hope you like this story.
Andy
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Wow the story was great I love it this story is in the Finalist list welldone XD
DNY--
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Thanks
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and applauding. I'm very glad you like this story so much. Thanks again for the gold.
I hope you enjoyed your contest.
Andy
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Nathan... love that name! Thanks for entering! Interesting how Tori put herself in tht position.
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Thank You
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. Nathan and Victoria, good Victorian names, aren't they? I hope that adds to the mood of the vampirism. I also hope that you like this story.
May you have many entries and much fun.
Andy
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FIRSTLY: licks nipples pf tha man/ woman !!!
Secondly" WHOA WAS THAT HOT OR WHAT.. certaily not the story I was expecting, and I mean that in a good way.. hehe brownie points for using one of my favourite names.. No really that was unique, more darker than expected as well... you really have proven youselg a high commended writer. - if that makes sense LOL
GOODLUCK
thanks you so much for entering & best wishes
lickes picture again *giggles*
blair~
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Thanks Blair
Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and applauding. I appreciate it. Glad that I chose the right name for the character
I'm also happy you like this story. I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Glad you like picture, too.
Andy
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Wow! Would make someone think twice on being alone in the theatre lol. I think this story was really great. I actually think the way he just took her home, had his way with her then dumped her sounds realistic for the more uncaring style of vampires. Enjoyed reading this one.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Thanks Joann
All of my vampires are rather uncaring. Victor changes toward the end.
I'm glad you like this story. Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate you reading me.
How are you today?
Andy
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Woa
that was..pretty amazing. It surely kept my attention! I think it deserves a place somewhere in my contest. It was awesome!
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Thanks
I'm very pleased that you like this story. Something to think about if you go to the movies
Are you being watched? Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it. I hope you have many good entries and much fun.
Andy
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Man Andy I love your vampires. They are charming hot,twisted, and deadly just like vampires should be and is looking forword for more of them. Will you make a new Dark Theater shory or is this it please say yes
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Thanks again
This is a different vampire. Kind of Phantom of the Opera style. Unfortunately, I have no plans to continue Dark Theater. I think it is just a one time story, although it is about a serial killer vampire. I'm glad you like it.
Andy
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wow
thats the first word that came to mind. this was really good. i really enjoyed it. i liked the little twist. thank you for entering my contest. i really enjoyed reading your story. -
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Thanks
I'm very pleased that you like this. I don't know if it is the kind of vampire story you are used to, but I thought I would try it in your contest. Thanks for hosting this contest, reading and commenting. I hope you have many good entries and a great time.
Andy
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That was a cool twist you didn't really expect it. Very well written although it could have been more detailed and or dragged out. It was a very good story. *claps*
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Thanks
I am glad that you like this and that it had an unexpected twist. Thanks very much for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I may try to add to the story later.
Andy
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Disposable women.
Miss Next?
The fangs got her better than the bang!
Rocky would have a fit. Now let us do the Time Warp.
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Thanks, Rebel
After all the liquid is drained from the vessel, the vessel is useless. My vampires do not usually leave survivors. What do we do in the Time Warp, surely you don't want to go back and deprive my vampire of his victim? Thanks a lot for reading my vampire. This vampire is a spin off of the Film Maker series, but there is thus far only one segment. I am writing religious stories right now. Never know what I might do next.
Andy
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I liked it
Wow, I did't expect the ending but in a sick kinda way it fit perfectly. I laughed at the casualness of it all. The main story kept my attention but the twist did it for me. Thank you for writing. Please keep it up.beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Thanks, Marks
Seems she had run into a vampire. Was it too casual? She didn't know he was a vampire until he put her in his trance. Then it was too late, of course. I hoped to string the reader along until the end. I am very glad that you liked it. I don't know what my next story will be about, yet. I am probably going to work on a chapter of The Profits Of War soon.
Andy
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I like the detailing in this up until the "sex" scene. Then it feels almost like an afterthought. I'd love it if you were able to expand on this. I really enjoy your stories
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Thanks, Totem
I will see about expanding more on this. Sensual erotica is not really a strong point. I enjoyed reading yours though, and I felt that you did quite well. I am still looking forward to the next installment.
Andy
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In the beginning, you give a lot of detail which sounds like you're giving a Science lab report more than telling a story. The vampire ending is great, but I have to agree with penman, she does give in way to easily.
beginning: 2, language: 1, plot: 2, ending: 3, dialog: 2, characters: 1.
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Thanks, Bronzy
I am rewriting; trying to improve the seduction, Nathan's mystique, and the ending. If I don't mess it up, it should be better. It will be a while. It seems that this story needs a lot of work.
Andy
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Dissapointed by the ending.
Hi Andy, i liked this story very much, the kind of thing i have come to expect of you, flows along nicely, and keeps the interest going.
The only disapointment was what happened to the girl, i thought he took a liberty with her
Great read.beginning: 3, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Thanks, Bill
It appears that everyone feels I need to work on this story. My vampires usually take liberties with their victims, but meeting my vampires usually has fatal results. I will work this over and try to make it more convincing. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Andy
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Interesting.
I like the general flow and concept. I think you might want to explore making the vampire have more mystical, dark power. It just seemed like Tori gave in two easy I guess. I think playing up the seduction part when she can't help letting him control her might be a nice added touch. Just a thought.
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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Thanks, Penman
Yes, I feel I need to expand on it and the seduction part is a perfect place. Also adding mystical aspects to the vampire, dark powers, seems like a good idea. She is easy, but not necessarily completely unrealistic. I will see what I can do to it without screwing it up.
Andy
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