Tyburn1
Teddy2
Softest
Smoothest
Silkiest
Cuddliest
Cuddling against the softest smoothest teddy in bed.
Holding the silkiest, cuddliest bear named Ted.3
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Ball5
Bounciest
Roundest
Funniest
Springiest
Against the wall it’s the bounciest, roundest ball
Sometimes the funniest, springiest one of all.6
Diamante7
Teddy
Soft, squeezable
Hugging, snuggling, comforting
Cuddly, small, strong, big
Roaring, sleeping, eating
Large, proud
Bear.8
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Ball
Round, fun
Rolling, throwing, catching
Kickable, colorful, hard, corners
Stacking, lining, building
Square, flat
Block.10
Author notes
Another assignment. Please pick which one you like, why you like it and what needs to be imporved on any.
Remember this is for childrens ages seven and under.
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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teddy poems
i love teddy poems they are just adorrrring like your poem
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Thanks for reading this and for commenting. I wrote it for a class on this site and it was a lot of fun. I've got a teddy bear story too that I did for the same class. I'm glad you liked it.
Again thanks
~*Brooke*~
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Adorable
I love the first set. It has great imagery and really brings to life a sense of childishness. Plus it has a nice, smooth flow when recited aloud. (And it's just so cute!) :]
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Thanks for reading this and letting me know what you thought.
~Brooke~
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Bravo
I like the first set. It moves in a pattern that can easily recited [sing song] that would encourage the listeners a chance to particiapate.
And...uh... for me, I do rate a poem. For a poem is just a short story with all the words that aren't really necessary to tell that particular story. [insert a smile here]
The first set also met with the approval of the two 3 year old girls visiting today. They wanted me to turn the page and read another.
So, on their behalf, More please.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Thanks for taking the time to read this and give your opinion on this. And thank the two three year old for me. I have a short story about this teddy bear they might enjoy it's called 'Wanted: Bear'. It's written for a six year old but they may like it.
Thanks again
~Brooke~
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That was really cute. I like the first two sets, the Tyburn. I think they are more child-like.
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Thanks
Hey thanks for reading and for telleing me which ones you liked. You are the first person. I liked those ones two.
Again thank you for taking the time to read.
~Brooke~
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I'm not really one for poems, I don't really know a whole lot about them !!! Sorry. I guess; therefore, I can give no advice!!! But I will read your other stuff!!!
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Got the bat signal you posted. Very feely type poem. Must be in a feely type mood. Girls, I think would relate, more, than macho, to this poem.Check my web site out, www.josephbejcekpoewhit.com
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