To all of whom I loved,1
There have been so many of you, each loved for a different reason. Each loved separate from eachother none less and none more but each special and sacred to me. I have loved you all in your own way for your own reasons, like god is said to love, unconditionally, like a mother's love I've cared for you. Each of you by name, each of you by who the each of you was to the world, and especially to me.2
In parting from you a new sadness graced my lips as the tears trickled lightly to them, with each finding of you its own smile, its own life. I couldn't have imagined any of you in an instant or in a million years. I couldn't have hoped for more or prayed for less. Each of you your own conquest each of you a memory that will live forever even though I will not.3
My conquests are only in theory do not take this as making any of you trivial. My conquest, sometimes, just looking into your eyes, or a conquest that I tasted your lips, touched your hand, laid next to you. My conquest is that I have brought any of you happiness or pleasure or desire of me for any of those reasons.4
It is the end of me that has brought us to this point. I am ended that you wanted more, you want for what I cannot be. You want for it to be you alone and in such my memory dies. We are ended in this we have parted now and I can not bear time's passing any longer. I can not bear to leave you wanting, because I no longer have anything to give. I held you like a child in my arms, or held your hand through our walks our journies. I thought I was the answer but it appears I was only the problem more than anything else.5
Farewell, I say to you, to each of you by name, the list that could stretch on forever but will be ended by this crude blade. Goodnight, I wish to you, do not let sorrow trouble your perfect complexions, do not let memories of me delude you into thinking I was anything other than I was after my passing.6
I was the greatest lover of all time, I deluded myself into thinking, but perhaps I never found the love I sought. Finding each of you, though, was worth the trial and the strife you each presented. The simple glance of your eyes into mine made it worth it all...7
Warmest thanks to you who have read this,8
You will be missed...9
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YOUR EVIL!!!! You have me blubbering again! you are so mean to me... Good luck again and I hope to read something new from you soon
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it's good.
i love it. forgive me for the short comment. Thanks for entering. Good Luck...
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tnx for entering the contest first of all.
wow i dont know what to say this is so good. very sad. i loved it. its very emotional. and discriptive. good luck and keep up the great work. great job really
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you like to make me cry dont you? I am sitting here reading this thinking of all my loves be they friend family or lovers I have lost you are evil to me!
Penny x x x
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Stunning
At first i thought you were referring to Carlos Castandea's character, but that's beside my point. I loved the story, you added so much real depth to what I always thought of as a one-dimensional character, a lady killer if you will. A blade does seem a bit messy for someone that smooth maybe? Anyways kudos to you Gothius.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 4.
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I like it. It's sad but touching at the same time.
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wow. this is very good. i really liked it.
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hey. okay so i hope that this isnt real (just a story, right?) lol. its beautiful and touching and moving. its very powerful and i hope that you continue writing because you are very good at it.
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God should be capitalized
ok I really hope that this is just a story because wow!! that's pretty powerful and it is beautiful too.
A few wording choices made some sentences a little confusing but overall it is an extremely sentimental piece that is definitely displaying your amazing talent.
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I choose not to capitalize god because capitalized restricts it to the god whose name is God and not all gods god can convey
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