Swish snap!!1
The whip came down on the bare back of the victim.2
Swish snap!!3
No sound came from the victim, its head hung in defeat. 4
Swish snap!!5
Blood now driped to the ground staining the stone floor.6
Swish snap!!7
Sounds of the torture echoed through the dark dungeon halls. 8
“Speak demon!” The attacker yelled. “I will have you striped of the skin on your back.” The victim mouth held in a defiant line, closed. 9
Swish snap!!10
The lips parted slightly and a sound of pain released from the swollen and bruised lips. 11
“Ah, you speak your smarter then I thought.” The smirking attacker said. 12
“Drop the body, let it think of what I have to offer.” The body was released and fell weakly to the hard stone dungeon floor. The attackers left the victim bruised and broken to struggle between life and death.13
Author notes
Who do you think the victim is, and what do you think should happen?
What did you think? Please comment!
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I don't know who the victim is. Or what should happen. His/her crimes were not explained in the story. Perhaps more will be relvealed in another story. I will be beack with another comment if I come up with an intelliegent answer. Great work!
Hugs,
Willow -
wow, this is pretty good. i like the story line and i cant wait 2 read more!!
~confusedevryday
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