Burden

I awoke with a start-- kicking my leg in terror at the loud ringing next to my ear. I grabbed the phone and answered on the second ring, hoping I was the only one who had heard it.1

"Hello?" I questioned, already knowing who it would be. Who else would call at--I checked my alarm clock-- 3:27 AM?2

"Sorry baby...!" She sounded a little upset, but at least she wasn't crying this time.3

"It's okay hun, I'm glad you called," I paused to yawn, 'So, what's wrong?'4

I knew I'd only get a truthful answer the fourth time I asked, but the other three times were still completely necessary.5

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my bf's POV [should I keep writing it?]

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  • Atrophya
    September 6, 2007
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    Definitely, you're a genius.