Quintessence

"What is this?!" The blonde haired king paced around the study room. 1

"Please sir, we did all we could possibly do!" The General stood still waiting for a response from the king. 2

"I made you a Corsible for a reason Cascury! To win victories for your queen!" The king stood still as the queen walked in. 3

"What is the news Dorckle?" The queen looked at her husband as if nothing would affect her. 4

"The armies have fallen in Burskail. The Southern armies are bloody and scattering. The armies are battered in the West but still strong. The Northern front is glowing with victory." 5

"So Cascury, what do you think we should do?" 6

"Well Madaum Mensure, I think we should rejoin the armies and bring the glory moral back to the men and women. I also have some new weapons and techniques for the army that I want to train the other Corsible's and Qualin's so the can teach the armies." She looked at her queen walk to the window waiting for a response.7

"What will these weapons do for us?" She stood at the window looking at all the land along the kingdom towards the North.8

"These weapons and strategies will help us in our strength and courage for the kingdoms armies."

"Are they your ideas?"9

"No...They were brought to me by a Qualin. He gave them to me and told me one of her soldiers came up with the weapons and ideas."10

"You trust in this soldier who you have little relation with who is not even one of your Qualin's?"11

"Yes man these plans have so much promise for our victories." The Corsible looked at her queen with longing hoping she would understand.12

"Look at you! The Corsible for our armies yet you rely on a soldier to save our kingdom! What happened to all the glorious strength that the Corsible's before you taught you? You are the Quin Corsible for a reason! To lead and protect your soldiers! Not to disgrace them to haidieus for your fallen pride!" Mensure went towards the door. "You have permission to do all of which you have told me, but if I don't see improvement in the next 4 cycles. Then your duties as Quin Corsible are stripped." 13

"Who is the most respected Queen of Whisplet in history?"14

"Quinalestia." 15

"Madaum Fluoristel you have been studying."16

"Now why wouldn't I? Galerstia."17

"I ment no offense madaum."18

"It's ok Galerstia, I have just been edgy lately."19

"Well I would say it is expected, but I wouldn't know myself. It may not be my place."20

"I think it's not your place!"21

"Shall I leave you alone?"22

"Again, I'm sorry Galerstia, I have no been myself lately. This war has taken its toll on me. I shall be left alone for a short time."23

"I will be in earshot of you need me before I return, Madaum." Fluoristel took a seat in the the relaxing soft couch. She half laid on the couch, sighing as she put he back of her cold hand on her forehead. Her long white hair just barely missed the ground as she lied there. She just sat there, thinking. Thinking of how much this war hurt. Yet she dared not to talk. Because the walls seem to have ears. 24

"Princess Flouritsel what seems to be the matter?" The angel statue above the bed creaked a sit began to move. Flouristel jumped as she grabbed her heart.25

"For Hakin's sake, can you not do that!" 'This is exactly why I don't talk my true thoughts out loud in this place.' She thought to herself. 26

"Well my apologizes for startling you madaum. But I thought i would tell you that they are expecting the armies to come together to rejoin the forces and have new strategies and weapons."27

"When was this!"28

"It was passed on to me about 1 secal ago."29

"How come you didn't tell me sooner?"30

"Well I thought I would leave you to study in peace."31

"Next time tell me when big news like this crosses your path!"32

"Again, my apologies." Flouristel went for the door, not really expecting where to go after hearing this. Suddenly the door burst open right before she got to it.33

"Have you been training for combat?" Dorckle heaved this out as he spoke.34

"Yes, I have been training for 10 years. Why must you ask this bustle question father?" 35

"Do you think you are ready for a task beyond any other princess before you have been asked?" 36

"Anything for my people and kingdom Dorckle!" She swelled as she spoke those proud words.37

"Your queen has ask that you lead the front of the armies with glorious pride and take the final battered victory for Whisplet." Dorckle squirmed as he stated this from his own daughter. 38

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Fluristel walked through the gate, not knowing what to expect. The greengals were skuring around from the unexpected guest. The labrynth was so much more flurished than she imagined. Instead of the dark green ivy with no color, there are roses and birds of paradise streamed through each other creating walls. She saw creatures popping up over the walls looking at her. They creatures flourished with bright colors and eyes of curiosity. She walked through it with such seriousness. She thought to herself of how right this felt, but there was just something wrong. It Felt so bad, she could taste it as if it was on her tongue. Her aura began to rise, her hair began to whisp without wind. The creatures started to shrill in terror. There colors began to shift to blend in the walls. She calmed herself down, and the air began to smooth....45

She came upon a gargantuan fountain. The carved angels seemed so alive as the water came from there pots. The only color that they had was there eyes. Each one had such colors that the eyes seemed real, but yet surriel from the color and patterns. 46

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