Broken Gurl I

*EERT EERT EERT*1

O god....Do i have to wake up.2

Chasity hated Mondays. It ment school and also ment that there were 5 days of it.3

Like every morning her mother wasnt home. Her mom was always working so alot of the time Chasity was home alone, and she actually liked it that way. She had time to me alone, to have time for herself.....4

She looked in the mirror at her reflextion, which always made her sick.... She said to herself, " Dont you look so lovely with your black make-up smeared eyes, from the tears that you cried last night." She still hurt and she didnt know what to do except cry. Tears became her best friend and the one thing that she knew would always be there....5

Chasity got dressed in her black baggy pants an black shirt and grabbed her braclets then left for school. Why'll she was walken it started to rain and then it rained harder. She stopped for a second and looked up at the sky and went deep in thought....6

"This day is going to be a bad day i can already tell."7

When she got to school she was late but also wet. Why'll walking with her head down toward her looker she bumped into some boy and her books fell. She looked up and saw the most beautiful thing ever. He had black shaggy hair with bright blue eyes. He wore baggy black pants with boots and a black shirt...8

"I'm soooo sorry...i wasnt paying any attention i was looking at the ground." said the boy9

Chasity snapped out of her day dream and answered back, "No its fine it was my fualt i wasnt paying any attention. I should of been watching."10

They stood there for a min just staring at each other then he picked up her books and handed them to her...11

"I'm Brandon by the way. I'm new here....."12

Chasity grabbed her books and told him, " Sorry but i have to go i'm late."13

As she walked away she thought to herself, " what the hell was that. What am i dong. He is beatiful and seems nice...GOD IM FREAKEN STUPID!!"14

The bell rang for 2nd period so she knew how late she was at that moment....Half way through 2 period Brandon walked in with his schedule and Mrs.Jones sent him to the seat next to Chasity.15

"Hi runaway", Brandon said to Chasity.16

"What do you mean runaway??" Chasity said.17

"Well one min you were there then the next gone".18

" Ya.....sry about that...i....anyways".Chasity was nervouse. She didnt know what to do. He was a complete stranger but so damn beautiful.19

The bell rang and Brandon followed Chasity why'll they walked....20

"I dont wanna be here.."Brandon said to make some kind of topic.21

"I dont wanna be here either i never did." replied Chasity..22

Then Brandon least expected asked Chasity," You wanna leave this place go some where else."23

Chasity looked at him with a blank look on her face. Then nodded yes.24

Chasity didnt know what she was doing. She knew she didnt want to do it but something was tellen her to take this risk.25

so together her and brandon walked off campus and started there walk to some where but they didnt know were was yet....... 26

Author notes

ya it was lame it will get better i swear

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  • Hes My Oxygen
    November 14, 2006
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    I can't wait until this is finished! Our writing has a lot in common and I loved reading this!!

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 1, ending: 2, dialog: 4, characters: 4.