Sneaking

Faintly green eyes peeked out of the darkness, disturbing the quiet scene skillfully. The petite owner of those eyes leaned back in the computer chair, hands resting on the arms. She watched the slow rising and falling of sheets on the bed that indicated her beloved was breathing. She smiled and rose, moving quietly to the foot of the bed. He did not know she had arrived and she marveled at the fact that she had crept into his room without waking him.

But he wouldn't sleep soundly for long. She would be sure of that. Smiling quietly to herself she slipped her pants down her legs and pulled her shrit off over her head. A car's headlights illuminated the room for a moment and she ducked down behind the footboard, peeking at her lover's still slumbering form. Her confidence regained, she rose and crawled onto the bed, creeping over him and kissin ghis lips.

He woke with a start, eyes blinking in the dim. He made some unintelligable noise and she pressed a finger to his lips again, moving to look him in the eyes. She removed the finger and replaced it with her own lips. He smiled and wrapped his arms around her, delightfully surprised at her sudden apperance. She kissed him again and sighed, lying beside him and holding him tightly.

"I'm home."

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Written for my mate. ^^

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  • Auburn Sunrise
    September 22, 2006
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    Awwww... such a little tease of a write. You need to add more!!!

  • malintir
    September 8, 2006

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    -Smiles stupidly- I love you, my darling one... I really, really loved this little story. :3 It helped to calm me down quite a bit, actually. I don't even know what I was worrying about. -Snuggles and purrs-

    I'm looking forward to you moving in with me... and us having our home together. -Kisses and nuzzles- And when I say, "Let's go home." You can say, "Okay." Instead of, "I can't go home; not for another three months." -Kisses-

    I love you, dear. ^^ I'll be sure to get this from you next time I'm up! -Nuzzles and loves-


  • Token Massacre silver member
    September 7, 2006

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    comma after faintly
    check over your spelling "te" = "the"
    did you mean to put "light" after dim?
    "figner" = "finger"
    "apperance" = "appearance"
    "laying" = lying

    could use more detailing, why was she sure he wouldn't wake? do they live together? if she was at the computer table was it in the room? another room? it seems a little vague. it's a good start though