The Stranger(Two Vampires)

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Juliet Rivers lay lifeless on the rough soil ground. Her green emerald eyes were gazed upon the tall dark stranger. His clear blue eyes were piercing through her soul, making it harder on her not to look away. She knew deep down that she was dead. She couldn’t move, she couldn’t breathe, and she couldn’t even hear her own heartbeat. But still she was frozen on those eyes, those eyes that seem to keep her alive. Suddenly without wanting to, her whole body flew up. Juliet’s bare feet planted in the ground, but here she was flying towards the stranger. He wrapped his arms around her, clothing her in his black coat. She felt nothing, no warmth, her body was colder then the ice locked in her freezer. She too was locked, locked in the stranger’s embrace. She smiled, and without realizing it, she felt fangs, her fangs slide down. The stranger smiled knowing his creation was a success. Two vampires joined at last. Joined together for eternity. 2

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  • ashwe91043
    March 10, 2004
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    this is awesome... do you like reading stephan king... you kind of write like that... you should write not only poetry but short stoires as well because you capture the readers attention and suck them in with such words that they can either realate to or at least imagine what it's like...