Erotica (part 3) - an interlude

He laughed at her antics as she leaned in again to nibble on his ear, pressing her self against the bulge under his kilt. He shivered at her fingernails running down his back before looking around. It was doubtful that she cared that this was the middle of a shopping mall, she was going to get what she wanted, right here, right now. Not that he cared either. Catching her lips with his as she tried to move down his neck, he swung her around so her back was to the wall. She giggled softly, when he released her mouth, moving her bare knee up under his kilt so that the front slowly lifted, as she rubbed her leg against his thigh. He could feel her knee high boots against his leg as she lifted hers farther up. 1

She laughed softly at seeing the faces of people behind him, none of them were really paying attention, but there was the occasional look of disgust when eyes did wander in their direction. No one could really prove it, but they knew what was going on. 2

His hands drifted down her sides, pulling at her corset ties, loosening them just enough for his hands to get underneath to her breasts. She sighed in his ear, leaning in to bite his neck, hard. She felt the shiver that went through him, felt his grip on her breasts tighten as his cock became harder under his kilt. Her nails traveled down his back again, forcing another shiver from him. He kissed her, then leaned down and nipped at her collarbone. A small gasp came from her lips as she slid her leg around his waist, and brought her other one up to meet the first, under his kilt. It came as no surprise that neither was wearing anything underneath, or that her skirt was really too short to cover much up anyway. 3

She taunted him for a few moments, raising herself above his cock, and rubbing up against it. He growled low at her, and grabbed her hips, pinning her to the wall and ramming himself inside. She buried her face in his shoulder, biting down hard and moaning. He thrust himself in again, lifting her as he entered and letting her slide back down the wall as he exited. Pushing back up into her, he caught her from underneath, holding her up as he plunged back inside of her. The feeling of her nails and teeth in his skin only urged him on as he moved in her, and he could feel her legs tighten around his waist, pulling him in even farther. His cock was already throbbing, ready to release inside her, when he felt her tighten around him. Letting himself go, he rocked her back and forth against the wall. He could feel her juices running down his cock, and he pumped his own into her pussy. 4

He held her there for a few moments, letting them both relax before allowing her down. She kissed him again, biting his lip briefly. It didn’t take long to readjust themselves, but she stopped him before they walked away. Putting her arms around his neck, she whispered into his ear, “looks like we’ve attracted a friend.” Following her gaze, he saw a mall security guard heading uncertainly towards them. He let out a loud laugh as they walked away, both entirely too amused.

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  • October 26, 2006
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    Very nicely done.

    beginning: 5, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.