The motion of imprisonment in a bed of glass1
That is first broken by the fumbling of a lady2
A loose colletion of feathers with a tail of soliday3
That almost screams the innocence desired at night4
Dancing through freedom and lies in the mood of depression fragile puzzle pieces that break away from this course5
Kiss shining, we're kissing in my eyes6
Melting away even the flower petals in our way 7
Make me shining, changing into the most exciting colors8
That first shone in a vision9
The field of view excels the dimension of panorama10
A perfect mimesis that can only tremble11
A cheap touch whose reaction is to look for secrets12
You want to see them even if they are coldly obscene13
A sea of gushing pleasure that alters the colors of the rainbow14
That strikes into this world adding shadows to the fringed game15
Kiss shining, imitating loneliness16
Cutting in space with entwined regret17
Make me shining, fragments of my scattered heart18
A radiance that surpasses hope19
Red soaked fingertips dye the atmosphere with fluttering butterly tears 20
And all is turned to sand...Shining, make you cry21
Kiss shining, we're kissing in my eyes22
Melting away even the flower petals in our way23
Kill me shining, changing into the most exciting colors24
That first shone in a vision25
Please don't cryin, imitating loneliness26
Cutting into space with entwined regret27
Make me shining, fragments of my scattered heart28
A radiance that surpasses hope29
Author notes
hn? well my big sis sasunaru18 helped me pick out big words for me and she also helped me type it. this thingy is for my best friend na-chan! na-chan! if u ever come to this site, this is how i really feel!!!
(-_-'...i wonder if i should have sed that)
also, i dedicate this to my best "net" friend eriKa-chan! and even tho she doesnt talk to me anymore, i still care about her! and eriKa-chan...I STILL WANNA TALK TO U! I'M SORRY IF I DID ANYTHING STUPID! *cries in a corner*
Please tell me what you think
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woohoo
Agree with redtearstains at first, but it sounded to me more like a song than anything else. Whatever the hell it is, its deep and very enjoyable...fluffmeister out -
errr.....
honey? well, you see.... umm... this is a song... and i'm very VERY SURE you didnt write this... since it's a song from the anime.. GRAVITATION.....to be exact... the title of this song is Shinning Collection.... try and write an awsome piece that you originaly wrote kay? maybe then i would praise your work. -
Fantastic! I neva realised you felt that about me that way! lol! joke! brilliant! fantastic work! Another hit from a bueatiful girl.
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Hello?
Ally, I'm sure your sister will explain why I have not been on StoryWrite. If not, I'll tell you when I talk to you next, Kay? I haven't been ignoring you and you haven't done anything wrong. Who's Na-Chan?
-Pinks-
P.S.
I loved it.
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Wow, this is fantastic, however, i think this should be posted on allpoetry as it reads more like poetry than a story.
Its always the quiet ones isnt it, you have a great talent that you should flaunt.
Line 7:Melting away even the flower petals in our way
This is beautiful, just sweet and pure.
beginning: 4, language: 4, ending: 4.
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