Today i live another day full of pain. Terror fills inside of me, from the past that haunts me everyday. Tears stream down my face, as i try to get ahold of all that is left of me. I tremble, falling to the floor, screaming out loud, crying out the contents of my broken heart. As i cry i am slowly dying from these exhausting days that i have had to face. With each step i take, it seems that i am getting no closer to what it is my heart desires. 1
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This is not done, i simply wrote some of my emotions down briefly. I intend to actually turn such emotions into some kind of piece of writing.
Please tell me what you think
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This is really emotionally (ok I just completely pointed out the obvious, sorry)It has such feeling and I'm sure it will be great as a real piece of writing. The way it's written is really good, I like it.
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