Sitting at the table, Anna drums her fingers impatiently against the scarred top; frustration coursing through her body as she waits for someone to come in and tell her what the hell was going on. Just as she thought she would start screaming with frustration, the metal door to the small interrogation room slammed open and in walked an officer she hadn’t seen yet. Raking her eyes over him, she noted in the back of her mind that if they had met under different circumstances she would have found the tall, dark haired man very attractive. Pushing the thought away she glares at him as he gracefully sinks down into the chair across the table from her.1
The man smirks and lifts his legs up, crossing them at the ankles as he rests his boots on the table. “You realize we don’t have to let you go, so do not even begin asking for your release.”2
Compressing her full mouth into a thinner line and crossing her arms across her chest Anna grits her teeth together. Ignoring the goose bumps that his low, rich German accented voice raises along her skin she sits up straighter in her chair “I haven’t done anything wrong for you to keep me here –“ she pauses long enough to read his name tag “Officer Krieg.”3
“I say you did something wrong, and this is enough in my country.”4
Anna found herself getting angrier “This is absolutely ridiculous. I’ve done nothing wrong, and still two men break into my hotel room this morning and take me into custody. Throw me in this dank little room and leave me sitting here for two hours with nothing but a Pepsi. I am an American citizen, I do have rights.”5
Officer Krieg gives a short half amused laugh and sits forward in his chair. “Do you know what country you are in?”6
“Does it matter?”7
Krieg leans forward further in his chair, his lips curled in a small smile. “Of course it does, just answer my question.”8
Sliding her hand in her pocket in a quick movement, Anna pulls out a hair tie; then with short angry movements she scrapes her long black hair back and pulls it into a ponytail and leans forward; the sudden movement causing the end of the ponytail to brush against her neck. “I have no idea exactly what pisswater country I ended up in after I was directed onto the wrong flight.”9
“So this is not America.”10
Anna’s lip curls with disdain “Of course it isn’t.”11
“So your citizenship means nothing. Your American laws mean nothing. You are not in the land of the free; in short…you are not free. You are going to stay right here until I feel like letting you go.”12
Smacking her hand against the table Anna growls “Are you telling me that until you feel like it, I’m going to remain in custody?” 13
Leaning back and smiling with satisfaction Krieg looks up at the ceiling “Maybe I’ll retire and forget about you. We’ll tell the American government that we haven’t seen you, if anyone even cares enough to ask.”14
Dropping her face in her hand, Anna takes several deep breathes; attempting to get her temper under control then looks back up. “What do I have to do in order to be released? I don’t even know why you have me here.”15
Without answering, Krieg leans over and picks up Anna’s purse off the floor then starts looking through its contents. Carelessly he tosses her passport and the wallet onto the table and continues to look through it.16
“Exactly what do you think you’re doing?”17
“What does it look like I am doing?”18
“Violating my privacy and going through my purse looking for God knows what. There isn’t any money in there for you to take. All of my traveler’s checks were with my luggage; which is now in Paris. Exactly where I should be.”19
Krieg snorts “Does it look like I need your money?”20
Anna gives Krieg a look clearly indicating what she thinks of his possible reasons for doing anything. “Why not? You have me in jail for no reason. What’s a little theft?”21
Giving a short laugh, Krieg shakes dumps the rest of the contents of the purse onto the table and arches an eyebrow at all the condoms that come tumbling out. “Magnums, not my first choice; but not bad either.”22
Shifting uncomfortably in her chair and trying not to blush, Anna attempts to ignore the comment and the condoms lying on the table “Could you at least do me the courtesy of telling me why I’m here?”23
Without answering Krieg pulls a small baggie out of his pocket and tosses it on top of the pile of condoms then smirks “Looks like you are possessing an illegal substance in my country. That’s an easy 15 years in jail right there.”24
Digging her nails into the arms of the chair, Anna gasps with outrage “You just put that there. This is ridiculous. You can’t do this to me!”25
Krieg rises slowly to his feet and motions with his hand “Stand up, hands behind your back; squeezing your wrists.”26
“Is this really necessary?”27
Frowning, Krieg puts a hand on the table and leans in close to her “If I have to tell you again, it will be after I use my tazer.”28
Anna pushes herself slowly to her feet, rubbing her hands on her jeans before moving her hands behind her back and wraps one hand around the other wrist.29
Locking the handcuffs around Anna’s wrists, Krieg tightens them a little more than is necessary. Making a small pain sound Anna pulls her arms away “That hurts, what are you doing this for?”30
Growling Krieg puts his forearm across the back of her neck and slams her face down against the table; holding her down and pressing his hips against her ass. “I have had enough of your lip and your attitude, American.” Struggling under him, Anna kicks back trying to get free. Krieg draws his gun and pushes it against her temple “Keep struggling, give me a reason. I will do it and no one will stop me.” Going completely still Anna inhales sharply, icy fear running through her. 31
Holstering the gun, Krieg straightens up and walks over to the intercom. Speaking in German he has a short conversation with the person on the other end. Anna straightens slowly, taking a step away from the table. As the lock turns from the outside, Krieg takes two quick steps towards her and grabbing her hair in his hands, yanking her head back sharply. “You want me to hurt you, don’t you?”32
Anna bites her lip to keep herself from crying out in pain and tries to shake her head no, but his tight grip stops her from moving her head at all. “No, please don’t hurt me. I’m sorry.”33
Pushing her back against the table Krieg smiles and releases her hair. Unbuckling the holster for his gun, he places it on the table beside her head. “I am going to remove your jeans, search you for more drugs. If you struggle or resist me in any way; I will hurt you. Do you understand me?”34
Holding still for fear of being hurt, Anna protests anyways “You planted those drugs. I don’t have any.”35
Ignoring her, Krieg undoes the button on her jeans and slides the zipper down slowly. Then pulls the jeans down, revealing the lacy white thong that Anna is wearing. Making an appreciative sound he runs his hand slowly up the silky skin of her inner thigh and brushes his fingertips up her pussy. Jumping with surprise, Anna sucks in a quick breath and moves her legs closer together as he pulls her thong part way down her thighs. 36
Krieg smacks her ass once, sharply “Spread your legs, and if I have to tell you to stop resisting one more time, I will show you what police brutality really is.”37
Squeezing her eyes shut, Anna unwillingly moves her legs apart. Smiling again, Krieg slides his fingers gently down her pussy lips and spreads them slowly. Anna shudders, her eyes opening with surprise at Krieg’s gentleness. He slides one finger down her pussy lips and gathers a bit of moisture on his finger before parting them just enough to brush his fingertip against her clit. Anna bites back a small moan as pleasure thrills through her body; her nipples growing hard and her pussy growing even damper. His cock rock hard and urged on by her stifled sound of pleasure Krieg massages Anna’s clit a little more firmly before scraping his nail delicately across the sensitive bud – causing Anna to cry out with pleasure as she tries to rock her hips down. With a low groan Krieg pushes his fingers into her pussy – not wanting to wait any longer to feel her hot slick pussy around his fingers. Leaning closer he inhales deeply of her sweet musky scent, any pretense of searching for illegal substances forgotten as Anna makes low sounds of pleasure and her muscles tighten around his fingers. Slowly at first, then faster as the moisture makes it easier for him to slide his fingers in and out, Krieg finger fucks her.38
Pulling his fingers out of Anna, Krieg stands suddenly and bites gently into the small of her back, right next to her spine. Anna pulls against the cuffs as she gasps at the feeling of his teeth against her skin. Releasing her skin he kisses slowly up her back, taking small bites and sucking lightly at her skin until Krieg is standing fully and he presses his hips against Anna’s ass. Taking her ponytail in his hand; Krieg pulls Anna upright and slides his other hand up her stomach. Kissing the side of her neck softly and inhaling her unique scent which lay right under the smell of her vanilla lotion he slowly unbuttons her shirt and pushes the shirt off leaving Anna in only her lacy bra. Krieg kisses her shoulder one more time and whispers how beautiful she is against her skin before turning her around and lifting her up to sit on the table. 39
Eagerly, Krieg kisses across the upper curve of Anna’s breast and unbuttons his pants, pushing them down and freeing his cock. Wrapping his arms around her body, he pushes her thighs apart with his knee and steps between them. Groaning as Anna wraps her legs around his waist and he slides the head of his cock and then the shaft against her pussy; Krieg grinds against her clit in a back and forth rubbing motion. Anna shudders with pleasure, her head arching back and her body getting tighter with pleasure as Krieg uses his cock to massage her clit before he thrusts his hips forward; burying his cock into her with one quick, hard thrust. Krieg tilts his head forward and bites hard burying his fangs into her neck where it curves into her shoulder. Anna screams pulling against the cuffs again as her body arches and the pleasurable pain runs through her body. Struggling in his arms a little bit, Krieg holds Anna tighter; arching her neck and biting deeper as he drinks her blood. 40
Squeezing her legs tighter around his waist, Anna cries out as Krieg bites deeper. Fucking her harder, Krieg pulls his fangs from her neck and unlocks the cuffs; pushing her to lay flat against the table. Anna runs her hands up Krieg’s arms as he slides his cock in and out of her; fucking her hard and fast before biting as deep as he can into her pulse. Anna moans with pleasure; her body throbbing harder. Circling her arms around his neck, Anna buries her fingers in his hair and holds his mouth tight to her neck as she gets closer to cumming. Her body clenching around his cock like a vise, Krieg shoves his cock harder into Anna’s pussy – having to work for every inch and drinking hard from her pulse at the same time. Anna screams, her body arching against Krieg’s and grinding into him as she cums; twisting her hand in his hair and shuddering as he thrusts into her one final time before cumming with her. Collapsing on top of her, Krieg lazily licks the blood from Anna’s skin as she gasps for breath and runs her hands down his back. 41
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Opening her eyes slowly, Mary smiles and shivers as David drags his teeth up her collarbone. David lightly nips at the hollow of her throat before brushing his lips lightly against hers. Kissing him back, Mary sucks lightly on his lower lip and grazes her teeth against it. Breaking the kiss, David draws back and caresses Mary’s cheek. “How was that sweetheart? One of our best roleplays yet?”43
Mary smiles softly and kisses him again “I think we should do that one again sometime.”44
The man smirks and lifts his legs up, crossing them at the ankles as he rests his boots on the table. “You realize we don’t have to let you go, so do not even begin asking for your release.”2
Compressing her full mouth into a thinner line and crossing her arms across her chest Anna grits her teeth together. Ignoring the goose bumps that his low, rich German accented voice raises along her skin she sits up straighter in her chair “I haven’t done anything wrong for you to keep me here –“ she pauses long enough to read his name tag “Officer Krieg.”3
“I say you did something wrong, and this is enough in my country.”4
Anna found herself getting angrier “This is absolutely ridiculous. I’ve done nothing wrong, and still two men break into my hotel room this morning and take me into custody. Throw me in this dank little room and leave me sitting here for two hours with nothing but a Pepsi. I am an American citizen, I do have rights.”5
Officer Krieg gives a short half amused laugh and sits forward in his chair. “Do you know what country you are in?”6
“Does it matter?”7
Krieg leans forward further in his chair, his lips curled in a small smile. “Of course it does, just answer my question.”8
Sliding her hand in her pocket in a quick movement, Anna pulls out a hair tie; then with short angry movements she scrapes her long black hair back and pulls it into a ponytail and leans forward; the sudden movement causing the end of the ponytail to brush against her neck. “I have no idea exactly what pisswater country I ended up in after I was directed onto the wrong flight.”9
“So this is not America.”10
Anna’s lip curls with disdain “Of course it isn’t.”11
“So your citizenship means nothing. Your American laws mean nothing. You are not in the land of the free; in short…you are not free. You are going to stay right here until I feel like letting you go.”12
Smacking her hand against the table Anna growls “Are you telling me that until you feel like it, I’m going to remain in custody?” 13
Leaning back and smiling with satisfaction Krieg looks up at the ceiling “Maybe I’ll retire and forget about you. We’ll tell the American government that we haven’t seen you, if anyone even cares enough to ask.”14
Dropping her face in her hand, Anna takes several deep breathes; attempting to get her temper under control then looks back up. “What do I have to do in order to be released? I don’t even know why you have me here.”15
Without answering, Krieg leans over and picks up Anna’s purse off the floor then starts looking through its contents. Carelessly he tosses her passport and the wallet onto the table and continues to look through it.16
“Exactly what do you think you’re doing?”17
“What does it look like I am doing?”18
“Violating my privacy and going through my purse looking for God knows what. There isn’t any money in there for you to take. All of my traveler’s checks were with my luggage; which is now in Paris. Exactly where I should be.”19
Krieg snorts “Does it look like I need your money?”20
Anna gives Krieg a look clearly indicating what she thinks of his possible reasons for doing anything. “Why not? You have me in jail for no reason. What’s a little theft?”21
Giving a short laugh, Krieg shakes dumps the rest of the contents of the purse onto the table and arches an eyebrow at all the condoms that come tumbling out. “Magnums, not my first choice; but not bad either.”22
Shifting uncomfortably in her chair and trying not to blush, Anna attempts to ignore the comment and the condoms lying on the table “Could you at least do me the courtesy of telling me why I’m here?”23
Without answering Krieg pulls a small baggie out of his pocket and tosses it on top of the pile of condoms then smirks “Looks like you are possessing an illegal substance in my country. That’s an easy 15 years in jail right there.”24
Digging her nails into the arms of the chair, Anna gasps with outrage “You just put that there. This is ridiculous. You can’t do this to me!”25
Krieg rises slowly to his feet and motions with his hand “Stand up, hands behind your back; squeezing your wrists.”26
“Is this really necessary?”27
Frowning, Krieg puts a hand on the table and leans in close to her “If I have to tell you again, it will be after I use my tazer.”28
Anna pushes herself slowly to her feet, rubbing her hands on her jeans before moving her hands behind her back and wraps one hand around the other wrist.29
Locking the handcuffs around Anna’s wrists, Krieg tightens them a little more than is necessary. Making a small pain sound Anna pulls her arms away “That hurts, what are you doing this for?”30
Growling Krieg puts his forearm across the back of her neck and slams her face down against the table; holding her down and pressing his hips against her ass. “I have had enough of your lip and your attitude, American.” Struggling under him, Anna kicks back trying to get free. Krieg draws his gun and pushes it against her temple “Keep struggling, give me a reason. I will do it and no one will stop me.” Going completely still Anna inhales sharply, icy fear running through her. 31
Holstering the gun, Krieg straightens up and walks over to the intercom. Speaking in German he has a short conversation with the person on the other end. Anna straightens slowly, taking a step away from the table. As the lock turns from the outside, Krieg takes two quick steps towards her and grabbing her hair in his hands, yanking her head back sharply. “You want me to hurt you, don’t you?”32
Anna bites her lip to keep herself from crying out in pain and tries to shake her head no, but his tight grip stops her from moving her head at all. “No, please don’t hurt me. I’m sorry.”33
Pushing her back against the table Krieg smiles and releases her hair. Unbuckling the holster for his gun, he places it on the table beside her head. “I am going to remove your jeans, search you for more drugs. If you struggle or resist me in any way; I will hurt you. Do you understand me?”34
Holding still for fear of being hurt, Anna protests anyways “You planted those drugs. I don’t have any.”35
Ignoring her, Krieg undoes the button on her jeans and slides the zipper down slowly. Then pulls the jeans down, revealing the lacy white thong that Anna is wearing. Making an appreciative sound he runs his hand slowly up the silky skin of her inner thigh and brushes his fingertips up her pussy. Jumping with surprise, Anna sucks in a quick breath and moves her legs closer together as he pulls her thong part way down her thighs. 36
Krieg smacks her ass once, sharply “Spread your legs, and if I have to tell you to stop resisting one more time, I will show you what police brutality really is.”37
Squeezing her eyes shut, Anna unwillingly moves her legs apart. Smiling again, Krieg slides his fingers gently down her pussy lips and spreads them slowly. Anna shudders, her eyes opening with surprise at Krieg’s gentleness. He slides one finger down her pussy lips and gathers a bit of moisture on his finger before parting them just enough to brush his fingertip against her clit. Anna bites back a small moan as pleasure thrills through her body; her nipples growing hard and her pussy growing even damper. His cock rock hard and urged on by her stifled sound of pleasure Krieg massages Anna’s clit a little more firmly before scraping his nail delicately across the sensitive bud – causing Anna to cry out with pleasure as she tries to rock her hips down. With a low groan Krieg pushes his fingers into her pussy – not wanting to wait any longer to feel her hot slick pussy around his fingers. Leaning closer he inhales deeply of her sweet musky scent, any pretense of searching for illegal substances forgotten as Anna makes low sounds of pleasure and her muscles tighten around his fingers. Slowly at first, then faster as the moisture makes it easier for him to slide his fingers in and out, Krieg finger fucks her.38
Pulling his fingers out of Anna, Krieg stands suddenly and bites gently into the small of her back, right next to her spine. Anna pulls against the cuffs as she gasps at the feeling of his teeth against her skin. Releasing her skin he kisses slowly up her back, taking small bites and sucking lightly at her skin until Krieg is standing fully and he presses his hips against Anna’s ass. Taking her ponytail in his hand; Krieg pulls Anna upright and slides his other hand up her stomach. Kissing the side of her neck softly and inhaling her unique scent which lay right under the smell of her vanilla lotion he slowly unbuttons her shirt and pushes the shirt off leaving Anna in only her lacy bra. Krieg kisses her shoulder one more time and whispers how beautiful she is against her skin before turning her around and lifting her up to sit on the table. 39
Eagerly, Krieg kisses across the upper curve of Anna’s breast and unbuttons his pants, pushing them down and freeing his cock. Wrapping his arms around her body, he pushes her thighs apart with his knee and steps between them. Groaning as Anna wraps her legs around his waist and he slides the head of his cock and then the shaft against her pussy; Krieg grinds against her clit in a back and forth rubbing motion. Anna shudders with pleasure, her head arching back and her body getting tighter with pleasure as Krieg uses his cock to massage her clit before he thrusts his hips forward; burying his cock into her with one quick, hard thrust. Krieg tilts his head forward and bites hard burying his fangs into her neck where it curves into her shoulder. Anna screams pulling against the cuffs again as her body arches and the pleasurable pain runs through her body. Struggling in his arms a little bit, Krieg holds Anna tighter; arching her neck and biting deeper as he drinks her blood. 40
Squeezing her legs tighter around his waist, Anna cries out as Krieg bites deeper. Fucking her harder, Krieg pulls his fangs from her neck and unlocks the cuffs; pushing her to lay flat against the table. Anna runs her hands up Krieg’s arms as he slides his cock in and out of her; fucking her hard and fast before biting as deep as he can into her pulse. Anna moans with pleasure; her body throbbing harder. Circling her arms around his neck, Anna buries her fingers in his hair and holds his mouth tight to her neck as she gets closer to cumming. Her body clenching around his cock like a vise, Krieg shoves his cock harder into Anna’s pussy – having to work for every inch and drinking hard from her pulse at the same time. Anna screams, her body arching against Krieg’s and grinding into him as she cums; twisting her hand in his hair and shuddering as he thrusts into her one final time before cumming with her. Collapsing on top of her, Krieg lazily licks the blood from Anna’s skin as she gasps for breath and runs her hands down his back. 41
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Opening her eyes slowly, Mary smiles and shivers as David drags his teeth up her collarbone. David lightly nips at the hollow of her throat before brushing his lips lightly against hers. Kissing him back, Mary sucks lightly on his lower lip and grazes her teeth against it. Breaking the kiss, David draws back and caresses Mary’s cheek. “How was that sweetheart? One of our best roleplays yet?”43
Mary smiles softly and kisses him again “I think we should do that one again sometime.”44
A contest entry
- erotic fantasies by britt-chere.
175 points, ended August 28, 2006, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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mmm sexy
i lurve a bloody painful fuck.

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MAGNIFIC

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excellent!
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Fantastic!
I think it was an amazing piece of writing and I wasn't expecting that twist at the end. All of the plot pieces pulled together nicely and the detail was wonderful!
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This is a fantastic piece of writing! Very good detail and I love the whole scenario. This story really turned me on. Great work and keep writing ^.^


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Oh wow, that story was so beautiful! I am so fuckin horny right now because of it.
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That's absolutely fantastic. The detail and the creativity with which this was written had me panting for more. This is a deliciously enticing write. I love the accent, and the roughness that then mixes with gentleness, and bondage, and a more fantastic feel. It's a great write. Good job and keep penning.
Kat

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yummy
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very expliit
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Ex cellent
I loved each and every line...It was beyond hot and exciting...I need a cold shower right now...I am glad I stopped by to read this
Much Love
Tessa

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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hey that was really good!


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I liked "Fantasies" quite a bit. Such a scenario has been a fantasy of mine for a long time. The idea of having to submit to an embarrassing search while helpless is powerful enough, but adding to it the fact that the person doing the searching is deliberately trying to arouse the person being searched makes the scene extremely erotic, especially for me. When "he runs his hand slowly up the silky skin of her inner thigh", it had the same effect upon me as upon Anna! The sex scenes are skillfully drawn and have the desired effect upon this reader. I had problems with the end, however. When he bites her and starts drinking her blood, I thought, "Huh? He's a vampire? Where did that come from?" And then just as suddenly, the whole things turns out to be a role playing game. I must admit that I wished you had left the story in its original premise, but heck, it's your story.
beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 1, dialog: 4, characters: 4.
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Thanks!
Thanks BongoCat, actually I've been considering taking off the roleplay and adding some indicators beforehand about him being a vampire. Am thinking about expanding the sex scene some and doing several more stories in a fantasy type theme. Then putting them together as a series type of thing. Not sure on that one yet; but am almost 100% sure I'm getting rid of the roleplay part.
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i love this isa fabulous very erotic and has alot of my favorite things in it great job
britt
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Thanks
Thanks for the review and love that you're holding a contest. It's my first one
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