When Jack's Dreams Came True Pt. 1

Jack walked into the bottom of the boat where Elizabeth was. She was brushing her hair and waiting patiently for him. As he walked closer, the smile on her face grew wider.1

"What took you?" She said.2

"The boat took a turn for the worst n' me compass won't exactly pointin right...but I'm here, and I'm ready to know you...savvy?" He said, putting his hand on her shoulder. She rested her hand upon his. Suddenly she stood up.3

"The notorious Captain Jack Sparrow...at his finest, I suppose?" She said, pushing him onto the bed. He grinned his cheeky grin.4

"Well, that be entirely up to you, love." He said, ushering her onto the bed beside him. She laid down and handed him the knife.5

"Do as you will, Jack...I've wanted to taste this...for a very, very long time." She said, seductively. He took the sword in his hand and pointed it straight to her chest. He tore open her corset and took off her undergarments so her breasts were inches from his face. She smiled at him and took his hand. She placed it upon her breasts and he began to squeeze ever so slightly. He gave a nervous laugh and she put her finger to his lips in a silencing manner. He grew silent and put his face to her nipple. He sucked on it.6

"Nice, Jack...harder." She said, between breaths. He looked up at her and nibbled her nipple with a grin on his face. She tore off his vest and shirt and began grazing his back. He was as tan as she dreamed. No hair on his chest, he was clean-shaven. He slid up to her mouth and kissed her ever so hard. She tore off his pants as the kiss continued. He directed her hands straight onto his erected penis. Now it was her turn to give a nervous laugh.7

"Better make sure Will doesn't find out." She said, rubbing his staff.8

"Will won't find out, savvy." He said, moaning.9

"Jack, I want you in me." She said, smiling. He quickly looked back at her. He removed her hand softly and held onto it. He tore off her dress and brought his hand down to her area. She moaned and giggled.10

"Yes, Jack...Yes..." she moaned. He smiled at the thought of pleasuring Elizabeth, as he always wanted to. He brought his mouth to her and licked her with all his might. He looked up at her and saw her bring her hand to her face and moan with pleasure. Sweat was beginning to come down from her forehead and he moaned from knowing Elizabeth was feeling amazing. Finally, he couldn't take it any longer and he went back up to her mouth and kissed her. She separated her legs and he put his tip on the brim of her vagina. He moved his hips around to tease her. She grabbed hold of his buttox and squeezed slightly.11

"Yes, alright, I agree." He said and inserted his penis into her pussy. She moaned loudly and he put his finger on her mouth to silence her.12

"Must be silent, don't want to wakey wakey the crew, love." He said, almost out of breath. Suddenly he began humping and she gave a soft groan with each hump. She helped him move along by moving her hips in slight circles. He moved faster and harder and kept whispering "I adore you, Elizabeth." in her ear. She held him close and said "I adore you, Jack." back to him. Finally, he couldn't take it any longer and he felt the amazing feeling of a thousand fingers running down his penis. He came into her and he felt like stars. She felt it inside of her and she couldn't hold back and she came as well, and she felt like a queen. The moan they equally made was loud enough to wake crew members from ships far off, however, no one was sober enough to wake up on their own ship...Jack rested beside Elizabeth, and he took her hand and kissed it.13

"I meant what I said, Elizabeth...every word." He said.14

"I did too....I hope Will doesn't find out." She replied. He looked at her as if he was the luckiest man on earth. Then, they fell asleep together.15

TO BE CONTINUED16

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Just a bit erotic...This is only the first part

Fanfic about Elizabeth and Jack

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  • August 17, 2006

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    nice one

    im new here this is the 2nd story i read the first
    and i admit im not really good at writing stories but wat i can say wow nice story, very hot, felt weird when i was readng it, meaning i was kinda into it (which is a good thing i guess )
    nice details! i guess i will stick to this kind of stories
    it's very entertaining haha
    only thing i can say though is about the title, was not really attracted with the title and for me it does not really go well with ur story but it is ur story so hey u can do whatever hehe

    can not wait to read the next part! maybe u can send me a msg when u have the next part, kno keep me on track, i kind of dont know how to look for the next part of the story
    keep up the good job

    beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.


  • August 16, 2006

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    Director's Cut?

    Hah, wow, that was interesting. I totally missed the adult tag in the title description, thinking this was going to be an adventure story of some sort. Well, to be perfectly honest, I don't know what to say. I never really thought Elizabeth and Jack had much chemistry in the movie, though at the end of the second one she does lay a pretty passionate kiss on him. So, I guess, er, you could say there was some indication of a possible secret romance. Yet somehow I doubt this is what Gore Verbinski had in mind.

    • HisPrincessMaloka
      August 17, 2006
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      That's why it's called a fanfic. It's a fan written story based on the fan's imagination and such...Ever heard of one?

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