Poof!1
Bang!2
A cloud of noxious smoke arises from behind a rock, followed by the coughing of a young,,, Ok fairly young? No... I dare not lie, he looks far too old but he says he'll eat my kidneys for breakfast if I don't say he's young.3
Anyways...4
A *ehem* young warrior extricates himself from behind the rock, beclothed in a robe of pure robeness with the power to deflect any but the sharpest of cutlery!5
So, out of a magnificent racking cough! Okok... Sheesh. He could at least be polite about it.6
Out of a magnificent cloud of mysterious smoke!7
Appears Naznomarn!8
A swordsman thick of muscle and thick of skull.9
He claimed that he has counted to infinity! TWICE!10
He actually died ten years ago, but the Grim Reaper can't get up the courage to tell him.11
Once a cobra bit Nanomarns' leg. After five days of excruciating pain, the cobra died.12
Of course, he was the one who started these rumours...13
So out of a cloud of dust... Arises Naznomarn!14
Please tell me what you think
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LOL it sounds like a five year old putting on a play and yet its so intriging please add the rest soon
beginning: 5, language: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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