An example of my writing for class

Grandpa has some photographs1

(He keeps them in a book)2

And whenever we go visiting3

We open it and look4

At all our Aunts and Uncles faces5

And relatives whom we haven't met6

And photographs of Grandpa7

That were taken long ago8

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