my prince comes again

After I was brought back to my reality and left the classroom of my hell for the last time, I went home for the summer. But not long after I left I get to come back for the hardest, most boring class on my schedule- band. So in my spare time I would stretch to get ahead, and one night I over worked myself and while stretching I fell asleep. My dream that night I will never forget.1

I once again saw my prince charming in armor so stunning and shiny I needed my shades just to see him. And I noticed there wasn’t a teacher or student in my sight. Just me and him, alone. I was his true love, the only one for him and he was the same for me. But as we start to get closer and closer to each other to have that one spine-chilling, electrifying kiss, that awful witch was back but as I look closer it wasn’t her it was a goblin with skin as green as the grass underneath us, and warts the size of a quarter. His voice was the worst of all, it sounded of a trumpeter gone bad. Just looking at him made the flower bushes next to us just go dead. And before I could think he grabs me and throws me on his magical saxophone and we ride off to the band castle. I tried to fight back as much as I could, I kicked and I screamed. But he said if I didn’t shut up, he was going to push me to the floor from the splits. (And I couldn’t get down all the way yet) but I told him no amount of pain will keep me away from my prince and he pushed me down even further. I could just see the fire burning in his eyes from the anger I caused him. And all because I was one minute late to practice. As I'm sitting there in pain I get to thinking to help keep my mind off of it, I don’t even know my princes name. But at that point I didn’t care. I knew he was perfect for me and that’s all that mattered. 2

That evil goblin in all his glory, wouldn’t let my prince in just cause he wasn’t part of his band of marchers. And in a sad way I was kind of glad he wasn’t part of this horrible band. But I knew if he was he could be with me and help me. And my prince shortly figured that out. He snuck around to the back and knocked out a weak flute player and stole the uniform to blend in with the band. Then he went searching for a search that seemed impossible but he never gave up. He finally had reached the top where he found me, but that awful goblin was standing in his way. Being prepared he pulls out his sword ready to fight, but he left his sword in his armor, so he is ready to fight with the flute he had in his hand. And the evil goblin, panicking he grabs the nearest thing to him, which is also a flute. 3

The evil goblin put up a real good fight, I almost doubted my prince, but good always prevails over evil. I instantly forgot all the pain I was in, I got up and just started to run toward my prince. He swept me off my feet and we left that awful band castle. Finally leaving the doors behind us I saw the most beautiful, strong, snow white horse I have ever seen. He helps me up and we ride off into the sunset about to share that passionate kiss.4

And my stupid alarm wakes me right before I could kiss him. So I get up and get ready for my band class to dance once again and see that ugly goblin of a band teacher. But that whole day I was just wishing my prince charming would come riding his snow white horse through those doors and sweep me off my feet and share the kiss that we never got to have. 5

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