Shadow And I

She was a shadow, fluttering in the breeze. She was there, yet somehow she wasn't.1

The most unpopular girl in school hand in hand with King of Cool Marcus? What is wrong with this picture? Okay, so maybe I'm just jealous, but what could the Quarterback want with the Queen of Nothingness?2

She approached me, and smirked as she passed. It was as if she said, " Here's for all the years you treated me badly. " As if I knew what I was doing! The picture of Al Pachino on the back of her shirt seemed to wink at me and say, " You lost, cockaroach. "3

ever heard the expression, " You don't know what you've got until it's gone? " Well, in the book of quotes after that one they should put, " This is for you, Clayton Thompson. " Because that's how I feel. It just keeps playing over and over in my head. She's gone with Marcus now, and I'll never et her back.4

I know he'll try to do something to or with her. I know it. He'll end up trying to rape her or something, and then, I'll kill him.5

I must let her know, so I approach her in the hall. " Shadow...uh..I mean..Angel, I love you. "6

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Now, do you want more? It took me a while to get the 3rd one out, but I did.

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  • Jettison
    March 7, 2004
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    yay

    This is awesome.... Am I right, thinking there's more to add to this? It's perfect just by itself, but it seems like there could be more. Right on, write on!

    ~ ~ dragonf1y ~ ~

  • Megan Dearest
    March 5, 2004
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    yes its coming along nicely. thank you for contacting me. much apprciation. i really like the story.

    Meg