A story about Susie

Susie was a girl that came into this world like any normal baby but her mum was horrible to her, she was only a teeneger herself but she treated susie like she was a doll she threw her around hit her kicked and took knifes to her. She was in and out of hospital with her, but the mum was always there saying that it was all accidents so it kept going threw the years. Now Susie Self harms herself badly and feels suicidal everyday now one listen to her she like she keeps hiting the brick wall. Susie is 20 years old she wants to die she locks herself in her room and crys she feels so alone and hurt inside. Her mum just laughs and ignores her1

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  • Treefingers
    November 21, 2008
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    What a miserable story in how it was written and subject matter.......


  • southernpride
    September 2, 2006
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    great

    i really like this esp. how you put so much feeling in it

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.