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I shook the camera. Damn thing kept taking weird pictures. The last 10 had popped up on my computer with different tints. Ranging from red to blue to purple. I smacked it with my open palm and felt a protruding piece sting my skin. 1

“Sorry James, that one’s wrong too. It’s all red.” I said staring at my screen. “Here pose just one more time. Please?” I looked at him with the most cute look I could muster. 2

“Fine.” He sighed, slinking down to the floor in front of me once again. “But this is the last one I mean it. After this I’m changing ” He bent his knees and put his elbows on them, raising one hand to his face. His pose was perfect. So nonchalant and care-free. Probably because he’d taken at least five pictures all with the same pose. Whatever the reason it looked great in the view screen of my digital camera. I clicked the button and the flash went off, making James blink. I swirled in my chair and looked at the screen to the right of me. Red again. I let out a frustrated growl as James rose to his feet and walked up behind me. His toned arms wrapped around me as he looked at the screen.3

“I think it looks kinda cool ” He said encouragingly to me as I glared at the bright screen in frustration. It would have to do, since my model, my boyfriend, was too tired to take any more. The posters would have to look red. 4

“I just wanted the poster for the show to look perfect. The drama department is going to be pissed ” I whined as he tightened his grip on me. 5

“Just tell them it’s your creative process.” He chuckled in my ear and his warm breath tickled my neck making it tingle. I hit the print button on the screen and heard the printer start whirring as it printed 30 copies of my red pictures.6

“I guess.” I said with a smile forming on my lips. I swivelled in my chair as his grip loosened and turned to face him. I tilted my head to the side as he planted his lips on mine. His soft smooth lips felt warm and comforting and I began to forget about the poster, and all my other troubles. His tongue slipped between my lips and teased mine for a moment before he pulled away.7

“I better go change.” He planted one more short kiss on my lips before walking away. I watched him walk in the tight torn jeans, that he would be wearing for the production and wiped my hand over my lips. White. His makeup had smudged all over my face. I swiped at it with my palms as I watched the last few copies printing on the desk. 8

I walked toward the men’s locker room and swung the door open. James stood there with nothing but his boxers on, about to put on his pants. I looked around and didn’t see anybody. 9

“Stop right there ” James spun on heels still holding his pants in his hands. He looked at me confused. I stepped toward him with a mischievous smile playing on my lips. “Drop em ” He looked at me and grinned dropping his jeans to the ground and raising his hands in a proclamation of surrender. 10

I walked forward until my hands were on his waist. I patted down from his chest to just below his boxers.11

“Ok, you’re clean.” I said in a stern voice trying my hardest not to let out the giggle that rested in my throat. I stepped back and looked him up and down. James, a six foot tall guy, was standing before me in nothing but green, silk boxers. His abs were tight, and all of his muscles tense with anticipation. His make-up was off as was the blue wig. His high cheekbones and full lips, accentuated his bright green eyes. His dark brown hair fell casually in his face in wisps. I leaned in and kissed him again feeling him harden against my thigh, as I pressed up against him. I could feel my own erection rising in my jeans. 12

He pulled me toward the bench without breaking the kiss. His soft lips slid on mine and his tongue explored the depths of my mouth as he sat down on the bench and I lean over him. I could feel his hands move from my waist to the my jeans and unbutton them. 13

The footsteps outside the door made me jump and break the kiss to look up toward the door. 14

“Don’t worry.” he whispered in my ear and let go of my pants as they dropped to my ankles. I stepped out of them and kicked them aside. Keeping eye contact with him, I unbuttoned my shirt and threw it on the floor as well. Reaching for my waist I peeled my white wife-beater off and threw it behind him as I wrapped my arms around his neck. I straddled him, knowing full well my now fully erect cock was poking him in the stomach. His was pressed firmly against the underside of my leg, and I could feel it jump when I kissed him again.15

His hand roamed down and one landed on my lower back while the other one started stroking me through the thin fabric of my shorts. He knew every spot of my body so it was difficult to keep control. Every stroke sent a shiver down my spine and an electric shock through my body. Finding the self-restraint I pushed his hand away and got up. In my jeans pocked I found two condoms and a small bottle of lube. They would come in handy. Grabbing his hand I pulled him up from the bench and led him to the other part of the locker room. 16

In the corner stood the large table that normally held people’s belongings while they showered. Right now however it would have a different purpose. The scene that I wanted to happen had been playing in my mind for the past hour. Now it was in hyper drive. Playing over and over. 17

I pushed him backwards until his waist hit he edge of the table. Throwing the condoms and lube on the table I knelt down. His gaze first followed the objects splayed on the table then me. He watched as I carefully peeled his boxers from him and threw them on the floor beneath the table. He watched as I ran my hands up his legs and to his hard dick. He watched as I slowly started to rub it with one hand as I cupped his balls with the other. He watched as I licked the vein under his head. He watched as I took his head in my mouth and sucked. And he moaned. He gasped for air and threw his head back. Watching him watch me was exhilarating and made me even harder than I had been before. I loved pleasing him. 18

His head tilted back he ran his hands through my hair, destroying the gel that had held it together until now. I knew he wouldn't push forward, but the fear of it turned me on too. The fear of something so dirty, something so raw happening to me. When I could sense that he was close I stopped and kissed up his abs to his chest. I kissed all the way up his neck, until I reached his ear. Kissing his cheek I moved toward his lips. I leaned in as if to kiss him and then flicked my tongue against his lips as I pulled away again. I kissed his other cheek and moved to his neck once again. 19

Biting his delicate skin I could feel him tense up as he moaned with pleasure. I chuckled into his neck and moved toward his lips again. Placing my own on his quivering lips I pushed my tongue into his mouth. His hands found their way to my neck pulling me in closer. He kissed me with utter passion. I felt how much he wanted me, simply through his kiss. 20

I pulled away and reached behind him to get the golden wrapped condom. I looked him in the eyes as I handed it to him and waited. He opened the wrapper and pulled the rubber out. Slowly he rolled it onto his dick and looked at me. He grabbed me around the waist and pushed me against the table.21

“Before we get to that.” He knelt to his knees and pulled my shorts off just as I had done to him. His hands found my throbbing cock and he started stroking. He took my head in his mouth and licked the vein. He sucked and took me deeper in. Moving back to my head he started again. Going deeper and deeper each time. I gasped with each pump and could feel the pressure building. I was close when he grazed his teeth gently along my shaft. My head flew back my hair flying out of my face and I let out the moan that I had held behind my lips since he started. He did it again and I groaned as I released my load down his throat. I could feel him moan around my dick as he sucked my warm juice down.22

He looked up at me as he pulled back, taking my still hard dick out of his mouth. He kissed me deeply letting me taste my own juice. It tasted salty and bitter, but not bad. It turned me on somehow. He leaned back and looked at me as I wrapped my long fingers on his rubber clad member. It was still hard and jumped at my touch. I felt the warmth in my hand for a moment. Then let go. Reaching behind me I grabbed the bottle of lube and handed it to James.23

I heard the squirt as I turned and placed my hands on the table, bending over it. I stuck my ass up in the air expectantly as I waited. I felt the cold lube on his fingers as he pressed them to my G-spot. I arched my back in pleasure. Slowly he ran his finger back to my hole. He pressed on it lightly then more firmly until he was inside. The cold lube sent a shock through my body as I felt it in my hot ass. He leaned over me and breathed on my neck. 24

“You like that?” His raspy voice whispered in my ear. I nodded quickly to show him I was. He fingered me gently at first exploring and stretching. Then he added a second finger gently. He started to pump now. Still slowly but with a bit more force. I arched my back into his chest and placed my head back on his shoulder. He added a third finger on one of the pumps, and if it hadn’t been for the pleasant stretching feeling I might not have noticed. He kept pumping until I was gasping and moaning loudly enough to hear me outside the locker room. 25

He stopped and slowly pulled his fingers out. He grabbed the bottle of lube again and put some on the his ever hard dick. He rubbed it in and leaned over me, his cock pressed against the inside of my thigh. 26

“Are you ready?” He whispered with concern. As I nodded he leaned back and positioned himself. He pressed the head lightly against my hole. Then gently pushed in. Only a bit. Then out again. He rocked in again only a bit further this time. He kept rocking in and out not to hurt me for almost a minute before he was in all the way. Pause. He leaned over as I moaned quietly and kissed my shoulder. He started rocking in and out again. The sensations it sent throughout my body were spectacular. Sparks flew to every nerve ending, making me cry out. He knew the angle and the strength with which to thrust. 27

I could feel my dick hardening again. I arched my back my hands still on the table, and he leaned forward until my back was again pressed up against his chest. The skin contact felt great. His hands were on my hips slowly rocking me in rhythm to his movements. He gracefully ran his right hand forward along my skin making it tingle everywhere he made contact. His hand reached my dick and began to stroke in rhythm with his thrusts. It was a sensation that made me shiver. I moaned loudly as my breathing became ever heavier. I heard James moan and gasp too as he came close to orgasm. His dick hardened even more inside me and I bit my lip to hold back the scream that was lodged in my throat.28

Moaning one last time I collapsed forward as my orgasm exploded all over the concrete floors. James thrust one last time and with a grunt also exploded, only his didn’t go on the floor. I felt him collapse on top of me as he hugged me around the waist. He pulled out of me and turned me around. He kissed me softly and slowly. 29

“I love you.” He whispered as he pulled away. I could see it in his eyes as well. He really did. Also why else would a guy dress up the way he did today for 4 solid hours and take pictures. 30

“I love you too.” I smiled at him. His lips broadened into a smile as well. He looked at me sheepishly as he blushed. He looked away and started fumbling for words.31

“I better go get cleaned up ” He walked away still smiling and still blushing. I watched as he started pulling off the condom and threw it in the trash, as I walked toward the showers.
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We walked out of the locker room dressed and holding hands. The pictures lay on the printer and I picked up the stack as we walked out of the room. I stared at the picture smiling. 33

“I look better like that. Don’t I?” James chuckled into my ear with his chin on my shoulder.34

“I prefer the real thing!” I smiled and turned to kiss him gently on the lips.35

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  • Midnight-x-Rose
    December 27, 2006
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    Very kinky, very sexy... Although I am not a guy I could imagine this felt awfully good... I know some guys that can do themselves and others right. Very hot, horny and loving at the same time. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

  • SlickNick
    September 18, 2006

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    Excellent Erotica

    Great short; I found myself expecting the main character to be female, since there were no references to his name/gender in the beggining. It slowly dawned on me that he's in fact a guy! Cool touch, I enjoyed it.

    Nick


  • adamcieslicki
    September 2, 2006

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    Its a great story, I kind of thought at the very beginning that it was a girl talking, but liked the change where it was actually a girl, well done for writing this peic

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  • Lovebehindthemask
    August 22, 2006

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    That was Shockingggg, I didn't get at the begining just like everybody else and I felt lost and confused I guess, then I had to go to the top again and reread it. It is very strong I tell you especially for a female writer.

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  • Midnight-x-Rose
    August 21, 2006

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    Oh god I hope your name isn't Daniel... That totally freaked me out. Not the fact that its homosexual but one of the main characters is my ex boyfriends name whom is bisexual and has done things like that in the past at school with a guy called Daniel. Thanks for sharing your lovely work with us though.... uhm... shuddering now... seeya xx

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  • Token Massacre silver member
    August 20, 2006

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    you've got some problems with your sentence structure. check over your punctuation as well
    i just have to say WOW that is one of the most erotic stories I have ever read!!! I couldn't even think about writing mistakes whle reading it. The details were amazing and captivating. It made me feel almost guilty, as if I were watching it happen. I'm impressed with your writing.

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  • tearsofsadness silver member
    August 6, 2006

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    at first i thought it was a hetero erotica, but later on--just like the other readers-- figured out it was a homo erotica... it's was really cool! the way you describe stuff was amazing!

    . Rewarded 4


  • PinkKittens
    July 29, 2006

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    It turns out that gay male erotica isn't really erotic for me. I guess I feel somehow left out. That's okay, of course, since the writing was very good, at least for the most part. One problem I have with your writing, though, is your occasional use of completely subjective adjectives. For example, in the sentence "The cold lube felt amazing in my hot ass", the word "amazing" has no concrete reference point for the reader. It's similar to a writer saying, "The sunset was awesome." Well, okay, but why? What made it "awesome" or in the case of the lube, "amazing"? (And just as a point of physiology, guys don't have G-spots. The prostate can feel similar to one, but G-spots are a gal thang.)

    . Rewarded 4

  • Red Dragon
    July 26, 2006

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    the narrarator appears to be a female up untill "I could feel my own erection rising in my jeans" (the last sentence of paragraph 12) and as far as what i've seen gay males (the ones that like recieving anal as opposed to the ones that like sucking dick)also really totally love the sensation of cum getting shot up into their intestines, but other than those 2 things it was perfect in a way that was amazing for a female writer, gay guys that like recieving anal and gay guys that like sucking dick are really 2 totally seperate types of guys (and almost completely mutually exclusive) and i really love how you made a distinction between the 2 which is dazzling because most females would never have ever thought to do that

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  • xocazzox
    July 26, 2006

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    Hahaha You're awesome!

    This...Was a very good writing. I loved it! It kept me on the edge and I didn't know what was going to happen next. This was..a very well written gay erotica. I loved it. Not a lot of people can actually show love between people in stories..and you did it extremely well. Great job.

    . Rewarded 4


  • mooseyx3
    July 26, 2006

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    Very Good

    This certainly was a pleasure to read. This was a very nice write, it was detailed and greatly showed the relation between the characters. I loved what you did with the picture at the beginning, it was creative. I found it amusing that you used the red tint too, when I actually hoped the image didn't have the red tint. This was a very tasteful piece, which isn't all too common amongst gay erotica. It showed a very loving relationship between the boys. Good luck in this contest, thank you for entering, and if you change anything, be sure to let me know!! . -Moose: OUT

  • Mr Brown
    July 26, 2006

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    Are you gay?

    I realize that you are a teenage female, but you write some fantastic homosexual erotica. I was impressed by your descriptions and relations of the feelings of the characters to the reader.

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