The Rain has come again

The wind blew the girls jet black hair out of her face.She had been here so many times that.She knew every turn and trist.Her bule eyes were as cold as ice.Her heart was ever cold."come dance with me Ash" said a boy her age."no John" she said back coldly.And as the night end it begin to rain"."The Rain has come again"said the girl now know as Ash1

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