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He was one of those types, the people the others do not ever forget. So, he stood in the twilight, alone. Many had come and gone, yet he stood there a monument, a testament to the rain.
“Tomas?” a voice asked, echoing the gloom.
He awoke from his state, “yes?”.
“It is time Tomas”. The one named Tomas turned, a figure stepped out of the darkness as it approached. Curious he thought, the woman, Dr. Cathrine had never approached him, outside of the facility.
Yet, still she stood there, on hollowed ground; ground filled with memory, and now this.
“Are you alright?” she asked.
“ I believe so doctor”.
“ Alright, will you join me?”.
“ Ok doctor”.
She stepped right in front of him, looked him in the eyes for a moment, and then turned away looking at the tombstone. Without saying a thing she turned around and headed away. He followed with out a word.
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very good i liked this very interesting maybe it could be a little longer but hey it was pretty kool well happy writing to u
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interesting
very interesting, but i dont believe there is a space after open quotes. good job, never the less!
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eek, sticky caps in the title!
"hollowed" => "Hallowed", probably?
2nd sentence shouldn't start with "So, ". "Many had come and gone" is cliche. After that, I really like where you start taking it, with the mysterious leading around, etc. Great mystery!
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wow, i like it. its a bit mysterious, but that's what you intended. i bet it'll be really fun finishing it up
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