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  • Token Massacre silver member
    August 28, 2006
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    your title is spelled wrong. Did your computer mess up and delete the story? Are you still editing it or perhaps re-writing the whole thing? Maybe you should use a different story


  • ritebymidnite
    August 12, 2006
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    What happened? Is this a joke? If it is it's very funny! LOL! One word, the shortest story I ever read! Criminal's spelled wrong.


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    July 30, 2006
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    Hello...Shortest story I've ever read. Short and sweet. lol
    Hope someone fixes this.
    ~Syren~

  • juanita032001
    July 24, 2006
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    lol, this is a spook link, there is nothing here....lol..


  • Robbwindow
    July 23, 2006
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    The title is strangely spelt.

  • unsexypenguin
    July 21, 2006

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    What?

    Did something go wrong or is my computer just plain retarded I clicked the link and when it opened it all it says is The. I hope this isn't it, I'd like the read the whole thing.

    -Miranda

  • unsexypenguin
    July 21, 2006
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    What?

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