Dear Jacob (2)

Chapter 1

I was just about to slip the note into his locker,when I saw his best friend,Devin near by. So,I decided to wait until after lunch.
As usual,I sat at our table,with Kelsey,Katie,and Tiffany. They did their usual talking and complaining about boys,dates,and life styles,and I did my usual listening.As you can see,it was a thrilling,not!
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I left lunch ten minutes early to put the note in his locker. I quickened my steps,afraid that someone would see me walking up to Jacob's locker and sliped it in. I had mixed feelings about giving him this note,half of me wanted him to know how much I cared for me and the other half of me wanted to find his locker combination,open his locker and steal the note back. Well,to late now,it's done.
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  • insanexdragonfly
    July 15, 2006
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    Sounds like the perfect begining to a story

    This sounds very interesting, hope to hear more.
    *Pinks*

    beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 4.