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Share looked up at the rose colored ceiling. Feeling as if she would hurl she looked back at her bedroom wall while she pulled herself to a sitting position. She looked down at the deep red gashes in her arms. Smiling to herself relizing it would all be over soon all the pain and suffering her mother had put her through would dissolve into thin air in a matter of time.
Time… something she didn’t have much of. Her mother could come home from work at any second. Share stood tumbling over to her door she locked it. Her legs shook as she tried to make her way back to her bed. Halfway there she collapsed onto her cold hard wooden floor.

Mrs. Benson walked into her small kitchen same as usual she put away the grocieries and walked to Shares room to make her do some chores so she would stay out of the way of whatever Mrs. Benson wanted to do. "Share get your azz in the front lawn and rack the leafs!" Mrs. Benson waited for the usual repley of silence and then a loud noise belonging to anything Share got her hands on and threw at the door imagining it was Mrs. Benson's head. Hearing silence for a entire minute Mrs. Benson knocked on the door. Again she was rewarded with silence. Turning the knob she found it locked. Mrs. Benson cursed under her breath. "Share you open this door right now or you'll be sorry!"
The silence finally got to Mrs. Benson and she raced to the garage retriving the key Bent her former son had left carlessly laying on the work bench. Pushing open the door she felt something in the way pushing harder she heard something slide over. Stepping into the dim lit room she turned on the overhead light screaming in shock of the grousum scene of her daughter Share's body laying in a puddle of dark rose red blood. 1

Bent stood over his sisters grave looking down at it in disgust. "Why the hell would you kill yourself?" Turning he glared at Share who sate resting on a small tire swing someone had hung in the old haunted graveyard.
"Bent you still haven't answered any of my queastions! Where am I?"
"You killed yourself, you should be in hell! But no he won't have it! God wants me to help you find your place!"
"What do you mean find my place?"
"Well since you killed yourself after begging forgivniss and being good to everyone and everything but your mother and the objects you threw at the door..."
"Bent!"
"God wants to give you a second chance..."
"What do you mean a second chance,"Share got off the tire swing confused.
"He's going to assign you someone to watch over, if you do good you have the choice to be reserected or to walk through the gates of heavon..."
"Wait what's happens if I mess up?"
"Then you go to hell. Don't worry I hear it's warm down there all year round!" Share glared at her brother. "Intel he assigns you a human to guard your free to roam as you wish I'll find you later." With that he just disappered.
"This is to weird... People can't just disapper like that... but then again we're not really people anymore we'll he's not he's a... angel? How's he an angel if he killed dad and then killed himself!"...2

....to be continued!3


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Author notes

Share thought it would be simple to guard a kid for a single year but she wasn't expecting to have to fight all her fears that the kid she was guarding and the devil brought up...

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