Yet Again ( Sequel to Once More)

Morning came as quick as the bird could sing, and the girl who was currently laying dormant on her bed wasn't happy about that thought. She stood up and made her way to her bathroom, to freshen up. It has been 1 week after that cursed day, and it has been 4 days since she had moved on. She looked at her reflection in the mirror and could still see the damage she had done. She took a long shower, brushed her teeth, dressed up, and ate breakfast. She was going to have a peaceful stroll on the neighborhood and hangout with her friends, but before she could even put a smile on her face, she saw her ex walk on the other side of the road with another girl. She just looked away and just smiled. She wasn’t going to let an asshole ruin her day. 1

After her walk, she went home only to see her mother’s very worried face. 2

“One of your friends had an accident, but I don’t know the details. Your friend Nathan called when you were out.” Her mother said nearly in tears.
“uh…who is it?” The girl asked nervously, never seeing her mother cry over HER friend.
“It was Blaine.” Her mother said, crying.3

The girl just run out of the house and to the hospital, the hospital was only a few blocks away. When she reached the hospital and asked for the room number. She was him. He had bandages wrapped on his head, and some more on his body. He was fortunately conscious and was talking to his parents who were ‘unfortunately’ being parents, and shouting at him on how careless he was. The girl just stood there, she don’t know what to do now that her strength was gone. She doesn’t know whether or not to be happy or sad, so she just stood there; unmoving. When Blaine’s mother noticed someone at the door she looked over her shoulder and run towards her, hugging her like a scared child would do to her mother. The girl didn’t return the hug nor did she moved, but she felt tears of what seems to be a mixture of relief and sadness run down her face. 4

“ He got amnesia! Blaine got amnesia!!!” Blaine’s mother cried.
“…” The girl was shocked. She couldn’t do anything.
“ He forgot about all of us” Mrs. Manson continued to cry. Her knees became weak and fell on the ground dragging the girl with her. 5

At the ground she could see Blaine staring at her. Her beloved friend, staring at her with confusion. She stood up and walked hesitantly up to him. She hugged him. She didn’t notice his parents walked out the door.6

“You know? You’re the second person who did that” Blaine said, smiling an oblivious smile.
“ Heh, Your such an Idiot.” She said, while situating herself on a chair beside the bed.
“Ah… and you’re the first person to call me that.” He smiled, as if flirting with her.
“Dude, you know who I am? I’m your friend. FRIEND. Not a chick you can flirt, got it?” The girl said somewhat annoyed, and almost forgot the whole situation.7

Blaine just smiled. He then stared at her for a minute before switching his gaze to the door. She also looked at the door, hearing the door opened. There stood her Ex and his new girl friend. 8

“Dude, we heard you got into an accident.” Her Ex said somewhat worried
“Huh? Oh yeah, I did” He said, looking at him with suspicion.
“Umm… I’m Steph, I’m his new ‘girlfriend‘” Steph introduced herself, adding an emphasis to the word girlfriend making the girl flinch.
“Sorry, Blaine but I need to go now” The girl said, shakingly walking towards the door avoiding the the couple.
“Bye!” Blaine said, smiling, he was about to follow her when he felt a bolt of pain shot through his whole body. 9

She walked mindlessly along the corridor of the hospital, trying to forget the pain she felt in her heart. It felt like someone was stabbing her and twisting it and pulling it ever so slowly. When she reached the exit she ran, ran as fast as she could to her sanctuary, her room. When she reached her room, tears were now staining her cheeks, hugging her cheeks trying to comfort her, but the only thought she could think about was how her tears were drowning her heart in despair and agony. She sat on the foot of her bed, crying…
“Why?! I thought I already forgot about it?! I thought I was all over this?!” She cried, she pulled a pillow out of her bed and covered her mouth muffling her screams. She continued screaming til she felt a burning sensation on her throat. She stood up and laid on her bed, on top of the covers. 10

Evening came, and she was still laying on bed, still crying, still in pain. It was as if the darkness was mocking her emotions. Mocking her, to make her remember, the pain and betrayal he caused her. She wanted these heart shattering emotions to disappear, but knowing her luck, it wouldn’t. 11

She woke up, not actually remembering she had fallen asleep and stood up. She logged on her computer and checked her mail, as usual. She smiled. People ‘do’ care about her. They’re just… miles away. 12

Even if her friend was still in the hospital, she knows he was going to be okay, and even if in the future she would still feel this heart shattering emotions, she knows she could always depend on people to help her. 13

Author notes

Well this is a non-fiction, but i exxagerated some spots, like Blaine having amnesia, when he only got a lump on the head... and the hospital scene. It wasn't as good as Once More but I still hope you guys liked it..

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  • Gbanger
    March 24, 2007

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    Great Work

    This was rich with emotion and powerfully psychological, very hard to achieve. You didn't just explain the emotion but you made it come to life. Excellent work. You should be very proud of this.


  • ThisIsHardcore-X
    July 31, 2006

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    *Sobs*

    This is, yet again, so sad! I can't believe you managed to get through something as emotional as this! The way it effected you clearly shows in your writing, I love the part at the end that is so different from the rest of the story. Great write!
    ~Charlotte

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Sith Lord Alvarez
    July 31, 2006

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    Great

    You have a way of drawing the reader in and feeling the characters pain. You should keep writing i think that u are really good


  • The Poetic Prince
    July 28, 2006

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    Wasn't as good as once more...

    Your right it wasn't as good as once more... it was even better. I love how you throw in the twists at the end which make the girl believe in life again. Keep up the great if not excellent writing!


  • Hinds
    July 21, 2006

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    it wasn't as good as once more? don't be so sure

    i thought this was emotional and very very well written, and after reading your weird 'suicide note' (in inverted commas) i had to get this to you as quickly as possible before you bash your self on the head with a screw driver or summat.

    beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 5.

    • tearsofsadness silver member
      July 21, 2006

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      thanks Hinds... I just felt like it wasn't as emotional as my other story...... and bout the other story?...i just want an outlet to my suicidal thoughts...


  • Godsaved
    July 16, 2006

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    Gettin ready

    Im gettin ready to read but i gotta leave for a week so im just gonna leave another comment for when im not here ill be bored the whole time with no reading material or musci but im sneakin my ipod in so itll be ok and im buyin a book so ill be alright ttyl


  • Godsaved
    July 16, 2006
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    and then he just keeps waiting

    still waiting talk to you in week


  • Godsaved
    July 15, 2006
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    work

    u need to add some im waitin im really bored with nothing to read so u should write smoething


  • Godsaved
    July 15, 2006
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    work

  • Godsaved
    July 8, 2006
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    ello

    i think this will turn out good like your other story and i will stay tuned and i will prolly just do the same thing that hinds is gonna do and just keep adding stuff until you finish it


  • Hinds
    July 3, 2006
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    Hmmm

    okay, i'm gonna keep adding stuff to this till you finish it

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