nightmare


I had a bad dream last night... 1

Mrs. Martinez..... when she used to have breast cancer... she was in a coma for 2 weeks

I had a dream that she went back into a coma
and i was at her bed side... crying and begging for her to awaken... and then they started pulling me off of her and i was grabbing her hand and iwas like NO NO NO ! and mrs.martinez is saying no madison dont let them take you, I'm still here if you can fight them i'll come back.... and i dunno it didnt make sense that she was like saying that cuz she was in a coma..but it was a dream

And I was screaming and crying GET OFF GET OFF OF ME SHE STILL WANTS ME SHE STILL NEEDS ME! ...... and all of a sudden I'm next to her and i lean down and she whispers ...... she whispers... " You are only.... a student" and her eyes close.... and my pupils get big... i dont member the rest... i prolly was like NOOOOOOOOOO or some crap... but man that was one of the mos powerful nightamres I've had in a while.. 2

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Why can't I be more then a friend....4


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  • Saleinaenachiya
    July 2, 2006

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    interesting

    a few spelling issues, but its good....is this real or not real? because it seems as though it would be read. Anyway, i've had a dream like that instead it was someone i didnt know, but i was crying (which i never do) so that meant hte person was well important to me....The title of course fits this peice, and the first line keeps you reading. I like it alot!

    beginning: 4, ending: 3, characters: 4.