Before

"Before"1

By: Donny Rodrigue.2

My eyes covered in dust,3

My heart having one true lust,4

Everything near is fading in the dark,5

Your my light inside my heart,6

Giving me a chance made my smile bright,7

All of my newfound happiness made my head light,8

I remember the pain I called you so,9

I'll never do it again I hope you know,10

This was something I dreamed of to,11

Once again me and you,12

When you first went I could barely gasp,13

Now before you go I promise to make us last.14

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  • March 1, 2004
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    Simply beautiful.