November 5th

November came and went1

but Love from upabove was sent2

Marc and I met a year ago maybe more3

bonfire night all the time we have been together we've had sparks flying4

like the firework display5

like my love blossoms with all seasons6

I had abuse so many years in my life7

for love to grow in my heart I feel happy again8

a clock ticks time passes by9

but he loves me and I don't know why10

I think I am ugly but beauty shines within11

within in my heart theres gold12

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  • Sharon Marie
    September 1
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    Beautiful write though sad

    Don't let anyone ever tell you your ugly you are beautiful and that's on the inside as well. I have a niece she is seventeen years she is autistic she can only say mommy and daddy other children and ridicule her because is different to she is my angel and so are you. keep on writing sweetie and grow from everything you learn don't listen to those people because they are the ugly ones real beauty is seen within. I'm so sorry you had to endure all this pain I to lost someone so dear and sweet her name was Tammy she would have been 39 she died 2 years

    on the 26 of June. I posted her picture and a poem for my sweet angel for her you can read it it's here at AP It's called

    It's Okay Mom To Cry A Bit .

    Please take comfort and know that I am here for you if you ever need me.

     

    God Bless and hold your head high and put a smile upon that beautiful upon that angel face and keep going forward and don't look back .

     

    Ill be your friend

    Sharon

  • passionate-poet
    April 8, 2008
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    i like that despite tragedy and pain there is still strength and goodness in a person thats been harmed that way its good to be able to shine even with that kind of darkness in a persons life. congrats hun! i am happy for you. no matter what all that matters is what is on the inside.