UNTITLED (for now) - Part 3

Jim Skefahquah tightened his tie and straightened his jacket as he walked up to the main doors of Channel 27 News. Standing tall and looking about in a superior fashion, he squared his shoulders pulled open the impressive mirrored doors. Pausing at the edge of the huge domed lobby, he smirked and strode purposedly across, his footsteps echoing off the walls.1

Known by his co-workers as the most conceited sonofabitch ever to walk the earth, Jim was known to the rest of Southern California as the best darn mereorologist around. HE could tell you what was going to happen, and when, right down to the 5 minute mark. The fact that the weather was nearly exactly the same day after day did little to detract from his fame. For you could be sure that if something other than sun, smog, and more sun was going to make an appearance. Mister Jim Skefahquah of Channel 27 News would know about it first.2

And as Jim flicked on the lights of the meteorology lab and eased into his more than adequately cushioned chair, he had a feeling that today would be one of those days. One of the days when he noticed something no one else would until it was too late. And he would be sure to rub it in their faces well.3

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  • me alone
    June 29, 2006
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    Your jumping from character to character quite quickly and randomly, I am assuming it will all make sense later. It just seems like very short amounts about someone before you jump to the next person. But you can write, yes you can.
    keep up the awesome work.
    ♥Kate


    • Ubacubissubej
      July 5, 2006
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      Oh, I am jumping too quickly, aren't I? These things just take up more room in my notebook, and then I type them, and.... well, they look so sad and pitiful! I really ought to go back and fluff these out a bit, and oh, dear, this whole thing is a flop, and it doesn't even have a title! Should I condense what I have into one? I was thinking that keeping the characters in separate parts would make it easier for people with short attention spans, (and less typing for me at any point) but, now its just short, and oh yucky!
      Thanks for reading.
      -UBA-

      • me alone
        July 5, 2006
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        Well I can see it working with the parts this short.
        But its defintly not a flop, I think its really really good! I really like it alot, its amazing.
        And I like that you jump character to character, i've read books like this before, as long as by the end they all get tied togther, and meet or sutting like that.

        I really like it!
        And don't call it yucky, I think its genuis.