Who?!?!?

MSN!1

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Thats where i met him!!
Hes just a really sweet guy! O.k so we started tlkin on MSN because it was the start of the holidays! Its my rule that i have a MSN-fest as soon as schools out!3

So i was in a joint convo with Nina and him.His names Luke, Nina when to middle school and elementary school with him so we got tlkin and decided to add each other. We have very random convos but hes really funny so we have lots to tlk about school ect. But i really hate the fact that ive never met him! We dont go to the same school which totallt sucks!4


(this is just the backgroung if u no wat i mean it shall get better with convos ect.)5

bi for nowxxxx6

Author notes

Ok my first story!!! be honest please!!!!!

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  • elfflower1989
    June 26, 2006
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    It wasn't funny at all. Nor do I think it constitutes as a story

  • edit
    June 26, 2006
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    is this a story or a journal entry? or a journal entry as a story? im sorry... i dont really get it..


  • ThisIsHardcore-X
    June 25, 2006
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    :D

    Love the story Lucy. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I know who this is about, so funny really- but very sweet!


  • LovingxForxEver
    June 25, 2006
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    well

    first off not trying to be mean or anything but you spelt totally wrong. I like it so far and can't wait to start reading the rest.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • Fluffykins
    June 25, 2006
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    hmmmm

    shows promise, its got a good start and you definitely know what you're doing, ill b sure to read the next part, count on it

    beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 5, dialog: 4, characters: 4.

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