Freedom give us freedom, let its light shine in our lives. Strike loose the chains that bind us to convention, for fredom is our birthright
Freedom to live freedom to love, freedom is being alive. Let us walk where our feet take us, breath in the air conciousness, let us swim in the river of life and
lie on her cool and shady banks.
Society take your hooks from out our flesh, do not enslave our minds withinneundoes and flowery words. For too long you have kept us down, like adolescents to be looked upon as children having no minds of our own, with no say in our own future, children open to your whims whatever form they take. What does it take to be free, what more can we possibly give you, you already have our dearest possessions, our youth our strength and the sweat from our bodies. And will claim payment from us even in death. 1
Author notes
i wrote it a few years back 1972 to be exact.
Please tell me what you think
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Very GOOD
Very too the point and very true statments!

beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.

