little girl

there was once a little girl who hated life. she hated her life because of her parents. you see her parents are divorced and i know that your thinking "yea so are lots of peoples" the difference is this little girls parents have never stopped fighting. her parents are trying to force her into choosing between the mum and dad...and she cant. she hates them both. this little girl is 8 years old and she already hates love. love ruined her family.1

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im not finished or anything. just thoughts for a story i HAD to get out my head

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  • Hellokittypunk
    June 12, 2006
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    Good

    It's a good idea. You should work on it, maybe expand on some ideas. It's really good though. I like it.