My Rose

John was having the day of his life. Just earlier, at school, he had started dating the girl he had adored since 4th grade, Rose. Apparently she had liked him since the day she moved to John's school. It was going great until he got home. For some odd reason his parents didn't approve of her, They had said she was nothing but trouble.1

But John didn't care he loved her and that was all that mattered. He hadn't met her dad yet but she said he would approve of John. He wasn't so sure about that, John knew he was constantly drunk, he could tell just by the way her dad swerved down the road on the way to pick Rose up from school.2

His day was OK until he started dating Rose then it was great. But after awhile of dating this is what happened.......3

He watched, as the rock skipped over the water. He thought his day couldn't get any worse. When he looked up from the water he saw his girlfriend coming towards him. He knew his day would be better if he could just talk to his girlfreind. After talking for about ten minutes he learned that she didnt want to talk she had just wanted to tell him that it was over, and that she had found someone else. He was heartbroken. The only thing he could think about was how many times they had kissed and told each other how much they loved each other.4

John was exactly six foot with blond hair blue eyes and a smile that could blind you. Rose was five foot, ten inches tall with blond hair and brown eyes and a smile close to that of her boyfriend. The two of them had been dating for over three years and John had thought it would turn out with the two of them getting married......5

That had been two days ago, and John still wasn't over the fact that, they had been in love. Or so he had thought. After his girlfriend ,Rose, had broken up with him, he had asked around about who she was dating now. John found out that she had actually been dating another guy ,named Jack, for about three weeks.John was mad. 6

Jack ,he found out, lived on a side road in the country. The moment he had figured out where Jack lived he decided he would murder him. The only weapon in John's house was his BB gun from 10 years ago that he kept just for memories. So he went out and bought a fourteen inch bowie knife. Jack's house was very secluded and therefore would be easy to get to, that is if no one else was there.7

Once john was at his house, he crawled up the gutter until he was at Jack's window. Jack was about John's height with brown hair he was not as muscular as John but he still would be hard to beat in a fight, John had to be carefull. As he looked inside he saw the sight he hated the most Rose was in bed with Jack.8

That was all John saw he was so mad he broke the window and went into a frenzy. He fell through the window onto a chair, the chair collapsed. As soon as the window had broke, Jack had woken up to see John rolling on the floor. He reacted faster than John would have liked. Jack reached under the bed and pulled out a 9mm and fired 3 times at where he thought John was. John cried out in pain as a bullet entered his thigh. John threw himself on the bed all the while hearing Rose's scream as she woke to find the two men fighting. John swung his blade at Jacks hand and knocked the gun away taking off half of Jacks index finger as he did. With Jack maimed and defenseless John went for the kill.He was so mad that as his blade went through Jacks heart he was already pulling it out to take the life of his ex........19

As the blade slipped free of Jack's chest, John turned to Rose. Her eyes were full of fear as she looked at him. John raised his blade high, as he thought of how many times she had told him she loved him only to be going out at night with some other guy. 10

As John brought the blade down he heard a grunt, and felt a weight hit him with such force that it knocked him off the bed. He was about to get up when he felt a bullet crach into his ribcage. John rolled over, and felt around for the knife he had dropped as he fell from the bed. His hand hit cold steel as he felt the blade slice into his finger. As quick as he could he switched the blade around so he could grip it. John brought the knife out and swung it with all his might. He felt the blade sink deep in to Jacks stomach.211

John rolled onto Jacks stomach and stabbed him until he couldn't lift his arm. John stood from the dead body of Jack and walked over to the trembling form of Rose in the corner. John raised his bloody knife once again to kill his ex. 312

As he brought the knife down he thought of all the times they had spent together, the nights on the beach laying side by side, the phone calls at night, and all the time they had spent together. Then sudenly it was over he was sitting with his head in his hands wondering how he could have done this. John stood to leave and fell straight to the floor.413

John died that night lying next to his ex, from loss of blood. The cops eventually found the bodies and decided that John was the killer of Jack and Rose...14