Reawakening


I'd forgotten how it feels
To be complete
To be whole and not a half
I put on a cloak
Covered my personality
Then convinced myself that what I saw was true
But you exposed the fraud
Allowed my eyes to see again
Removed my veil of vitriol 1

You were my surprise
Youthful face of unending innocence
Such a contrast to my appearance
An adolescence long departed
Yet you saw me in naked splendour
Stripped of years and preconceived notions
I offered you answers
You asked not one question 2

I was judgemental but you remained
Uncomplicated in your opinions
Taught me to look into the mirror
To view what others saw
Not what I imagined to be there 3

For years I had not seen past the boy
Your russet hair and blue eyes of kindness
Age was a secondary thought to you
If I felt sadness, you made me smile
If I got it wrong, you made it right
When I was in darkness, you brought the sun 4

Yet we to the world will be only friends
I have the chance to give to you
Your need to fly
My need to help find your wings
So this was a moment shared
In our lifetime will last forever
We experienced the reawakening
Of a human heart.5

Author notes

I wrote this about someone who gave me back my life in a dark period I was going through.

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  • Barbara Moderators member
    July 22, 2006

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    This is very well done. It's always great when someone can be there for another person in their time of need...sort of like an undercover angel or something. I'm wondering why this is listed with storywrite, and not allpoetry, since it seems to be a poem.